鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Also, use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Keep your answer concise and clear, for example, say 'I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. The last time I bought shoes was two years ago.'

範例: I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. For example, the last time I bought shoes was two years ago.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about your experience. For example, say 'Yes, I usually buy shoes online. The last time I bought shoes was from the Adidas website for training purposes.'

範例: Yes, I usually buy shoes online. For example, the last time I bought shoes was from the Adidas website for training purposes.

建議: Be careful with numbers and consistency. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually don't spend much money on shoes. For instance, this year I spent about 1000 riyals. I prefer not to buy very expensive or very cheap shoes, so I usually spend no more than 500 riyals.'

範例: I usually don't spend much money on shoes. For instance, this year I spent about 1000 riyals. I prefer not to buy very expensive or very cheap shoes, so I usually spend no more than 500 riyals.

建議: Avoid contradictions and unclear statements. Use clear reasons and linking words. For example, say 'I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes are often inconvenient, unnecessary, and expensive. Comfortable shoes are easy to wear and better for daily use.'

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes are often inconvenient, unnecessary, and expensive. Comfortable shoes are easy to wear and better for daily use.

× I had buy shoes

✓ I had bought shoes

The verb 'buy' should be in the past participle form 'bought' after 'had' to form the past perfect tense correctly.

× I don't, uh, often buy it for, for an example

✓ I don't, uh, often buy them for, for example

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; 'them' should be used instead. Also, 'for an example' should be 'for example'.

× I buy my shoes from online stores

✓ I buy my shoes from online stores

The phrase 'from online stores' is correct; no preposition error here.

× I buy my shoes from online stores for for example

✓ I buy my shoes from online stores; for example,

The phrase 'for for example' contains a repeated preposition; it should be 'for example'.

× Li last time I bought uh my shoes, it was from a website called Adidas

✓ Like last time, I bought my shoes from a website called Adidas

The sentence structure is awkward; 'Li' should be 'Like', and the sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× I bought it for, uh, training

✓ I bought them for, uh, training

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; 'them' should be used instead.

× Such instance this year I just spent 1000 real on shoes

✓ For instance, this year I just spent 1000 riyals on shoes

The phrase 'Such instance' is incorrect; 'For instance' is appropriate. Also, the currency 'real' should be plural 'riyals' when referring to an amount.

× I usually spend no more than 500 riyal

✓ I usually spend no more than 500 riyals

The currency 'riyal' should be plural 'riyals' when referring to an amount greater than one.

× It's easy to use, uncomfortable

✓ They're easy to use and comfortable

The sentence contradicts itself by saying 'easy to use, uncomfortable'; it should be 'comfortable' to match the intended meaning, and 'shoes' is plural, so 'they're' is appropriate.