鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子补充细节。

範例: I don't buy shoes very often because I think shoes should be replaced only when they are worn out or very dirty. Usually, I buy new shoes once or twice a year.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅，建议使用完整句子，避免口语填充词，并用连贯的连接词丰富内容。

範例: I have never bought shoes online because I believe trying them on is important. If the shoes don't fit well, it can be uncomfortable and difficult to walk.

建議: 回答内容不够具体且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并提供具体原因，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I think clothes are more important. Also, I prefer comfortable shoes, so I buy them only when necessary.

建議: 回答表达不够连贯，句子结构有误，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明理由。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because although fashionable shoes look nice, they are often not comfortable. Since I often travel and walk a lot, comfort is more important to me.

× I think shoes is the thing that we don't need to change such often

✓ I think shoes are the things that we don't need to change so often

这里'shoes'是复数，谓语动词和后面的名词也应使用复数形式，'is'应改为'are'，'thing'应改为'things'，'such often'应改为'so often'以符合习惯用法。

× like to change it when it couldn't use and if it was very dirty I would like to change it, but if it can.

✓ like to change them when they can't be used and if they are very dirty I would like to change them, but if they can.

这里指的是鞋子，复数形式，代词和动词应与复数主语一致，'it'应改为'them'，'couldn't use'应改为'can't be used'，'was'应改为'are'。

× I don't have experience to buy shoes online before

✓ I don't have experience buying shoes online before

动词'have'后面接动词时，'have experience'后应接动名词形式，'to buy'应改为'buying'。

× I usually think that clothes is more important than shoes.

✓ I usually think that clothes are more important than shoes.

'clothes'是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式，'is'应改为'are'。

× Shoes is a thing that we don't need to change how often because it is more important and efficient if shoes are uncomfortable.

✓ Shoes are things that we don't need to change very often because it is more important and efficient if shoes are uncomfortable.

'Shoes'为复数，谓语动词应为'are'，'thing'应改为复数'things'，'how often'应改为'very often'以符合表达习惯。

× I prefer to wear comfortable shoes, fashionable shoes. Are beautiful but it may not be comfortable to walk.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable shoes. Fashionable shoes are beautiful but they may not be comfortable to walk in.

句子中缺少主语，'Are'应改为'Fashionable shoes are'，'it'应改为'they'，并补充介词'in'使表达完整。

× I think comfortable shoes is a better choice because we often go to travel or doing something for walking.

✓ I think comfortable shoes are a better choice because we often travel or do something that involves walking.

'go to travel'是不正确的表达，应直接用'verb travel'，'doing something for walking'表达不自然，应改为'do something that involves walking'。

× I think comfortable shoes is a better choice

✓ I think comfortable shoes are a better choice

'shoes'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式，'is'应改为'are'。