鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: "that that", "I I"). Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't buy shoes very often because I prefer saving money. However, if I find a pair that is both stylish and practical, I might buy them. For example, last year I bought a pair of SH sneakers that I wear almost every day.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "that time", "that suit", "they the shoes"). Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng mệnh đề và giới từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I bought shoes online once. I spent around 200,000 Vietnam Dong on a pair that I found online. Although they were really cheap, the shoes are comfortable and I have been wearing them for several years now.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "want to spend around under", "doesn't have a high quality", "expensive one just are"). Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng thì và số nhiều, số ít để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I usually try to spend under a million Vietnam Dong on shoes because I think very cheap shoes don't have good quality, but expensive ones are not always necessary for me.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý định rõ ràng nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến câu khó hiểu (ví dụ: "with her come to pursue", "that my to my taste", "not suit my style"). Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý thích và so sánh bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và chính xác hơn.

範例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I want to wear them for long periods. However, I also consider the style that suits my taste. For example, my mom recommended many comfortable shoes, but I didn't buy any because they didn't match my style.

× if I find a shoe that that is a stylish and practical

✓ if I find a shoe that is stylish and practical

The article 'a' should not be used before adjectives 'stylish' and 'practical' when they are used together to describe a noun. The phrase 'a stylish and practical shoe' is correct, but 'a stylish and practical' without a noun is incorrect. Here, 'that that' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'that'.

× I might buy them

✓ I might buy it

The pronoun 'them' is plural, but 'a shoe' is singular. Therefore, the pronoun should be singular 'it' to agree with the singular noun 'shoe'.

× last year I bought a pair of SH sneakers that I I wear it almost every day

✓ last year I bought a pair of SH sneakers that I wear almost every day

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary because 'that' already refers to 'a pair of SH sneakers'. Also, the repetition 'I I' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× Yes, I bought shoes online once that time I spent around 200,000 Vietnam Dong on that suit that I found it online

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online once. At that time, I spent around 200,000 Vietnam Dong on a suit that I found online

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and lacks proper punctuation. It should be split into two sentences for clarity. Also, 'that suit that I found it online' is redundant; 'that I found online' suffices without 'it'.

× Although it's really cheap but they the shoes are comfortable

✓ Although it's really cheap, the shoes are comfortable

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. Only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'they the shoes' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'the shoes'.

× I have been wearing them for several years now

✓ I have worn them for several years now

The present perfect continuous 'have been wearing' is acceptable but 'have worn' is more appropriate to express the action of wearing shoes over a period. However, this is a stylistic choice and not a strict error. No correction needed if style is preferred.

× I often want to spend around under a million Vietnam on shoes

✓ I often want to spend under a million Vietnam Dong on shoes

Using both 'around' and 'under' together is contradictory. Choose one quantifier to express the intended meaning. 'Under a million' means less than a million, so 'around' is unnecessary.

× because I think that very cheap shoes doesn't have a high quality

✓ because I think that very cheap shoes don't have high quality

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'have a high quality' is better expressed as 'have high quality' without the article 'a'.

× but expensive one just are really necessary for my life

✓ but expensive ones are really necessary for my life

The subject should be plural 'ones' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. 'One' is singular and does not agree with 'are'.

× I definitely with her come to pursue because I want to wear it for long periods

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I want to wear them for long periods

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'With her come to pursue' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'prefer comfortable shoes'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'.

× However, I also consider the style that my to my taste

✓ However, I also consider the style that suits my taste

The phrase 'that my to my taste' is incorrect. It should be 'that suits my taste' to correctly express the idea that the style matches the speaker's preference.

× my mom recommended for me a lot of shoes that were comfortable

✓ my mom recommended a lot of shoes that were comfortable to me

The verb 'recommend' is not usually followed by 'for me'. The correct structure is 'recommend something to someone'. So 'recommended a lot of shoes to me' is correct.

× but I didn't buy one because it's just not suit my style

✓ but I didn't buy one because it just doesn't suit my style

The phrase 'it's just not suit' is incorrect. It should be 'it just doesn't suit' to use the correct verb form and auxiliary verb for the third person singular subject 'it'.