鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but a bit repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and finish your sentences clearly. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid trailing off. For example, you could say: "Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I like to match different styles to different occasions. I usually buy shoes two or three times a year to keep my collection updated."

範例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I like to match different styles to different occasions. I usually buy shoes two or three times a year to keep my collection updated.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example: "No, I have never bought shoes online because I find it difficult to choose the right fit. Moreover, returning or exchanging shoes bought online can be troublesome compared to buying clothes."

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I find it difficult to choose the right fit. Moreover, returning or exchanging shoes bought online can be troublesome compared to buying clothes.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and some grammatical mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and "um". For example: "It depends on the style and type of shoe. For simple slippers, I usually spend around 20 to 30 dollars, but for branded shoes, I can spend up to 100 dollars."

範例: It depends on the style and type of shoe. For simple slippers, I usually spend around 20 to 30 dollars, but for branded shoes, I can spend up to 100 dollars.

建議: Your answer is clear but incomplete and has some hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid trailing off. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example: "I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I wear them daily. However, I occasionally buy fashionable shoes for parties or special occasions."

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I wear them daily. However, I occasionally buy fashionable shoes for parties or special occasions.

× I like different styles and depending on the occasion I like to wear different styles.

✓ I like different styles and, depending on the occasion, I like to wear different styles.

The original sentence lacks commas to separate the dependent clause 'depending on the occasion', which affects clarity. Adding commas improves sentence structure and readability.

× So I usually buy two or three times a year so I have a collection of shoes. But.

✓ So I usually buy shoes two or three times a year, so I have a collection of shoes.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. Adding 'shoes' after 'buy' clarifies the object, and removing the fragment 'But.' corrects the sentence structure.

× I believe it's bit hard to find the best match by shopping online.

✓ I believe it's a bit hard to find the best match by shopping online.

The phrase 'bit hard' is missing the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'a bit hard' to indicate a small degree of difficulty.

× Meantime it's really hard to return or exchange.

✓ Meanwhile, it's really hard to return or exchange items.

'Meantime' is less appropriate here; 'Meanwhile' fits better. Also, specifying 'items' after 'return or exchange' clarifies the sentence.

× If I buy a show online rather than buying clothes, it's bit difficult.

✓ If I buy a shoe online rather than buying clothes, it's a bit difficult.

The word 'show' is a typo and should be 'shoe'. Also, 'bit difficult' needs the article 'a' to be correct: 'a bit difficult'.

× Uh, it depends, uh, on the style and the type of the show.

✓ Uh, it depends, uh, on the style and the type of the shoe.

Again, 'show' is a typo and should be 'shoe' to correctly refer to footwear.

× I am, I uh, usually consider go up to 100 bucks.

✓ I usually consider going up to 100 bucks.

The verb 'consider' should be followed by the gerund form 'going', not the base form 'go'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes, but occasionally I will buy fashionable ones specially if it's a party wear or a special occasion.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes, but occasionally I will buy fashionable ones, especially if it's party wear or a special occasion.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; 'especially' is the correct adverb to indicate emphasis. Also, 'a party wear' should be 'party wear' without the article 'a'.

× Uh, most of the time I will go with comfortable shoes which are affordable and.

✓ Uh, most of the time I will go with comfortable shoes which are affordable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.