鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达略显冗长。建议使用现在时态描述习惯，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: No, I don't like buying shoes often because I think their prices don't match their real value. Therefore, I usually buy shoes every two or three years.

建議: 回答中时态混乱，且表达不够连贯。建议统一时态，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明网上购物的便利之处。

範例: Yes, I usually prefer buying shoes online because I don't like going to stores. It's convenient since I can easily find different styles and check the sizes online.

建議: 回答中金额表达不清且语法错误较多。建议明确金额单位，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并避免双重否定。

範例: I usually spend less than $40 on shoes because I don't like to spend too much, and I believe affordable shoes can still have good quality.

建議: 表达中存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones often attract too much attention, and I don't like being the center of attention.

× No, I don't because I think the price of the shoes didn't match its real value.

✓ No, I don't because I think the price of the shoes doesn't match their real value.

这里的时态应该保持一致，描述现在的看法时应使用一般现在时。'didn't match'是过去时，应该改为'doesn't match'。另外，'shoes'是复数，指代时应使用复数代词'their'。

× No, I don't because I think the price of the shoes didn't match its real value.

✓ No, I don't because I think the price of the shoes doesn't match their real value.

'shoes'是复数名词，指代时应使用复数代词'their'，而不是单数代词'its'。

× So I only buy the shoes in every two years or three years.

✓ So I only buy shoes every two or three years.

'in every two years'是不正确的表达，正确用法是'every two years'，表示每隔两年。且不需要定冠词'the'。

× Yes, most of the time I didn't like to go to the stores and I think it's convenient to buy the shoes online because it's easy to get the shoes and measure the size.

✓ Yes, most of the time I don't like to go to the stores and I think it's convenient to buy shoes online because it's easy to get shoes and measure the size.

这里描述的是习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时'don't like'而非过去时'didn't like'。

× Yes, most of the time I didn't like to go to the stores and I think it's convenient to buy the shoes online because it's easy to get the shoes and measure the size.

✓ Yes, most of the time I don't like to go to the stores and I think it's convenient to buy shoes online because it's easy to get shoes and measure the size.

'shoes'前不需要定冠词'the'，除非特指某双鞋。这里泛指买鞋，故去掉'the'。

× I would say maybe under $4000 because I don't like to spend much money on the shoes and I think the cheaper shoes didn't have the awful quality.

✓ I would say maybe under $4000 because I don't like to spend much money on shoes and I think cheaper shoes don't have awful quality.

描述一般事实时应使用一般现在时，'didn't have'应改为'don't have'。另外，'the cheaper shoes'应改为'cheaper shoes'，去掉定冠词。

× I would say maybe under $4000 because I don't like to spend much money on the shoes and I think the cheaper shoes didn't have the awful quality.

✓ I would say maybe under $4000 because I don't like to spend much money on shoes and I think cheaper shoes don't have awful quality.

'shoes'前不需要定冠词'the'，'awful quality'前也不需要定冠词'the'，因为这里是泛指。

× the fashionable shoes may attract people's attraction and I don't like to be an attractive person or I don't want everyone looks at me.

✓ fashionable shoes may attract people's attention and I don't like to be an attractive person or I don't want everyone to look at me.

'attract people's attraction'表达错误，应为'attract people's attention'。'everyone looks at me'缺少不定式'to'，应为'everyone to look at me'。

× So I would say comfortable shoes is better.

✓ So I would say comfortable shoes are better.

'shoes'是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。