鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I do not like shoes, uh, do I'm not so interested on that. But uh, about a month ago I bought a pair of white designed simple sneakers, uh, because it was comfortable to work.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
No I haven't. I when whenever I bought I buy a shoes I often go to the shoes shop and try whether the shoes will match or not.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I usually spend about ¥2000 to ¥3000 on shoes. I prefer casual shoes with a simple design, so I don't often buy expensive ones. However, someday I want to buy a pair of high quality shoes for special occasions.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Strongly, I prefer comfortable shoes. I often exercise at outdoor so comfortable shoes would work on my activity. Uh beside fashionable shoes, they motivate my.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答えることを心がけましょう。例えば、最初に質問に直接答え、その後に具体的な例を述べると良いです。
範例: I am not very interested in buying shoes, so I don't buy them often. However, about a month ago, I bought a pair of simple white sneakers because they are comfortable for work.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分數: 60.0建議: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現が目立ちます。質問に直接答えた後、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。
範例: No, I haven't bought shoes online. I usually prefer to go to the shoe store to try them on and see if they fit well.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答は比較的良いですが、もう少し具体的な理由や例を加えるとさらに良くなります。例えば、なぜその価格帯を選ぶのか、どんな特別な場面で高品質な靴を履きたいのかを説明しましょう。
範例: I usually spend about a52000 to a53000 on casual shoes because I prefer simple designs. However, I would like to buy a pair of high-quality leather shoes for special occasions like weddings or formal events.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分數: 65.0建議: 文法の誤りと意味の不明瞭な部分があります。理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。また、最後の文は意味が伝わりにくいので改善が必要です。
範例: I strongly prefer comfortable shoes because I often exercise outdoors, and comfort is important for my activities. Although fashionable shoes are nice, comfort is my priority.
文法
× I do not like shoes, uh, do I'm not so interested on that.
✓ I do not like shoes, uh, so I'm not so interested in that.
The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'interested'. The correct preposition is 'in'. The phrase should be 'interested in something'. This is a common collocation error.
× I when whenever I bought I buy a shoes I often go to the shoes shop and try whether the shoes will match or not.
✓ Whenever I buy shoes, I often go to the shoe shop and try whether the shoes will match or not.
The word 'shoes' is plural, so 'a shoes' is incorrect. Also, 'shoes shop' should be 'shoe shop' because 'shoe' acts as an adjective here. The sentence was also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I often exercise at outdoor so comfortable shoes would work on my activity.
✓ I often exercise outdoors, so comfortable shoes would work for my activity.
The phrase 'at outdoor' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'outdoors'. Also, 'work on my activity' is unnatural; 'work for my activity' or better yet 'be suitable for my activity' is more appropriate.
× Uh beside fashionable shoes, they motivate my.
✓ Uh, besides fashionable shoes, they motivate me.
The phrase 'beside fashionable shoes' should be 'besides fashionable shoes' to mean 'in addition to'. Also, 'motivate my' is incorrect; the correct object pronoun is 'me'.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)