鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，例如“forbs”应为“but”，以及表达不够自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单且正确的句子结构，并避免重复。可以说："I like buying shoes, but not very often because my mother advises me to buy high-quality shoes even if they are expensive."

範例: I like buying shoes, but not very often because my mother advises me to buy high-quality shoes even if they are expensive.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“brought”应为“bought”，“last year's”应为“last year”，且句子不够连贯。建议使用连贯的句子并注意时态和单复数。可以说："Yes, I have bought shoes online last year when I was still in China. It is very convenient to buy shoes online there."

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online last year when I was still in China. It is very convenient to buy shoes online there.

建議: 句子结构不正确，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题并说明原因，使用正确的语法。可以说："I sometimes spend about CN¥1000 on shoes because I believe that higher price means better quality."

範例: I sometimes spend about CN¥1000 on shoes because I believe that higher price means better quality.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，且表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。可以说："I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is the most important when wearing shoes. For example, when I have to walk a long distance, comfortable shoes help me a lot."

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is the most important when wearing shoes. For example, when I have to walk a long distance, comfortable shoes help me a lot.

× I like buying shoes forbs it's not really often because my mother told me that I should buy new shoes by high price so that it has high quality.

✓ I like buying shoes, but not very often because my mother told me that I should buy new shoes at a high price so that they have high quality.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'forbs' seems to be a typo for 'but'. The preposition 'by' should be 'at' when referring to price. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I buy. I brought shoes online in last year's when I was still in China.

✓ I have bought shoes online last year when I was still in China.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'I buy' and past tense 'I brought'. The correct past tense verb is 'bought'. Also, 'last year's' should be 'last year' without the possessive. Using present perfect 'have bought' is more appropriate for experience.

× It's very convenient in China to buy shoes online.

✓ It is very convenient to buy shoes online in China.

The prepositional phrase 'in China' is better placed at the end of the sentence for natural English word order.

× I sometimes spend money on shoes is CN¥1000 because I think get a better quality shoes even though it has high price, it's OK.

✓ I sometimes spend CN¥1000 on shoes because I think getting better quality shoes, even though they have a high price, is OK.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'shoes' is plural so 'it has' should be 'they have'. Also, 'get' should be 'getting' to function as a gerund. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I think, uh, when you wear shoes, be to feel comfortable is the most important things.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I think, uh, when you wear shoes, feeling comfortable is the most important thing.

The phrase 'be to feel comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'feeling comfortable'. Also, 'things' should be singular 'thing' to match 'the most important'.

× And, uh, for example, when you have to walk a long way, you have to wear.

✓ And, uh, for example, when you have to walk a long way, you have to wear comfortable shoes.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'wear'. Adding 'comfortable shoes' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.