鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding repetition and using correct verb forms. Also, clarify your points with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love buying new shoes. It depends on the type; for example, I usually buy sports shoes twice a year because I use them often. However, for fashionable shoes, I prefer to buy them twice a year as well, to keep up with trends.

建議: Use past tense correctly and avoid mixing tenses. Provide more specific details about your experience and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. For instance, last month I purchased a nice pair from Amazon. They were of good quality and very comfortable, so I prefer buying online as it saves me a lot of time.

建議: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Specify the currency and use linking words to compare different types of shoes and their costs.

範例: I usually spend between 3000 to 4000 rupees on formal shoes because I like to buy good quality ones. However, for sports shoes, I typically spend around 2000 rupees, depending on the brand and quality.

建議: Make your answer clearer by avoiding confusing phrases and using correct grammar. Explain your preference with specific reasons and examples, and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For example, I bought a new fashionable pair last week which looks great for special occasions. However, I also choose comfortable shoes for daily use because they are practical and easy to wear.

× Yes, I love to buy, buying a new shoes.

✓ Yes, I love to buy, buying new shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. 'A' is used with singular countable nouns. Here, 'shoes' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.

× For example, if it is a spot source, so I prefer to buying a twice in a year.

✓ For example, if it is a sports shoe, I prefer to buy it twice a year.

The phrase 'spot source' is incorrect; it should be 'sports shoe'. Also, 'prefer to buying' is incorrect; after 'prefer to' the base verb 'buy' should be used. The word 'a' before 'twice' is unnecessary. The conjunction 'so' is redundant after 'if' clause.

× But it is a fashionable shoes, so I would prefer twice, you know?

✓ But if they are fashionable shoes, I would prefer to buy them twice, you know?

'Shoes' is plural, so 'a' should not be used. Also, 'it is' should be changed to 'they are' to agree with plural 'shoes'. The verb phrase 'prefer twice' is incomplete; it should be 'prefer to buy them twice'.

× Yes, I want to buy shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

The question asks about past experience ('Have you ever bought shoes online?'), so the answer should be in the present perfect tense to indicate past experience, not a desire or intention.

× For instance last month I buy nice shoes from the Amazon, it has a good quality and comfortable for me.

✓ For instance, last month I bought nice shoes from Amazon; they have good quality and are comfortable for me.

The action happened in the past, so 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought'. 'The Amazon' is incorrect; 'Amazon' as a company name does not need 'the'. 'It has' should be 'they have' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Comfortable for me' needs the verb 'are'.

× So I just buy from online and it save my time.

✓ So I just buy online and it saves my time.

The phrase 'buy from online' is incorrect; 'buy online' is correct. Also, 'it save' should be 'it saves' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I love to buy a stool so I just spend 3000 to 4000 money on the buying a suit for instance.

✓ I love to buy shoes, so I usually spend 3000 to 4000 on buying a pair of shoes, for instance.

'A stool' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'shoes'. 'Money' is uncountable and should not be used with numbers directly; currency units or 'amount' should be specified. 'Buying a suit' is unrelated; likely meant 'pair of shoes'.

× If it is a sport shoes I usually spend 2000 money.

✓ If they are sports shoes, I usually spend 2000.

'Shoes' is plural, so 'it is' should be 'they are'. 'Sport shoes' should be 'sports shoes'. 'Money' is unnecessary here without specifying currency.

× I prefer both shoes festival shoes which provide the face and of our trains.

✓ I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes which suit my needs.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and words ('festival shoes', 'provide the face and of our trains'). It should be corrected to clearly express preference for both types of shoes.

× For instance, I buy a new fashionable shoes last week, so it is a good for me, but also I prefer comfortable shoes which are useful for daily use.

✓ For instance, I bought new fashionable shoes last week, so they are good for me, but I also prefer comfortable shoes which are useful for daily use.

'A new fashionable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; 'a' should be removed. 'Buy' should be past tense 'bought' to match 'last week'. 'It is a good' should be 'they are good' to agree with plural 'shoes'.