鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Absolutely, I really like buying shoes, especially sneakers and vans and I usually buy shoes when I have money gave when by my mom and usually on Ted's even.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Actually, I have never bought shoes online because I want to go to the shop and try the shoes that I want to buy on my feet and I want to see how it's actually looks like when it's on my feet.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I usually buy second hand shoes, so it's usually about 1 to 2 million Vietnam Dong and sometimes I buy new shoes and it's about $100.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I think it depends, when I go to school or go to work and I use for daily work I will prefer comfortable shoes and when I have to go to some parties or some events I will choose fashionable shoes.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lộn xộn và thiếu rõ ràng, cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên giới hạn câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers and Vans. I usually buy them when I have some money saved or when my mom gives me some. I often shop during sales events to get good deals.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分數: 75.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng câu hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên chia câu dài thành các câu ngắn hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến thì và cấu trúc câu để tránh lỗi.
範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in the store. This way, I can see how they look and feel on my feet before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分數: 80.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể thêm một chút chi tiết để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ 'usually'.
範例: I usually buy second-hand shoes, which cost around 1 to 2 million Vietnam Dong. However, sometimes I buy new shoes, and they usually cost about 100 dollars.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分數: 85.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ như cách dùng thì và giới từ. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
範例: I think it depends on the occasion. For school or work, I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them daily. But for parties or special events, I choose fashionable shoes to look stylish.
文法
× I usually buy shoes when I have money gave when by my mom and usually on Ted's even.
✓ I usually buy shoes when I have money given by my mom and usually on Tet's eve.
The phrase 'gave when by my mom' is incorrect. The correct past participle 'given' should be used to indicate the money was provided by the mom. Also, 'Ted's even' is a misspelling of 'Tet's eve'. The conjunction 'and' is correctly used to connect the two time references.
× I want to see how it's actually looks like when it's on my feet.
✓ I want to see how it actually looks when it's on my feet.
The phrase 'how it's actually looks like' is incorrect because 'how' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'look' without 's' and without 'like'. Also, 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is', which is correct here. The correct structure is 'how it actually looks'.
× I usually buy second hand shoes, so it's usually about 1 to 2 million Vietnam Dong and sometimes I buy new shoes and it's about $100.
✓ I usually buy second-hand shoes, so it's usually about 1 to 2 million Vietnamese Dong, and sometimes I buy new shoes and they cost about $100.
The phrase 'it's usually about 1 to 2 million Vietnam Dong' incorrectly uses 'it's' (it is) to refer to plural 'shoes'. The pronoun should agree in number with 'shoes', so 'they cost' is correct. Also, 'Vietnam Dong' should be 'Vietnamese Dong' as the currency name.
× I think it depends, when I go to school or go to work and I use for daily work I will prefer comfortable shoes and when I have to go to some parties or some events I will choose fashionable shoes.
✓ I think it depends. When I go to school or work and use shoes for daily activities, I prefer comfortable shoes, and when I have to go to some parties or events, I choose fashionable shoes.
The phrase 'I use for daily work' is incorrect; it should be 'use shoes for daily activities' to clarify the object and preposition. Also, the sentence is long and can be better structured with punctuation and clearer phrasing. The modal 'will' is unnecessary here as the speaker is stating preferences in general.
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