鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "two eat" which seems incorrect. Try to make your sentences clearer and more structured. Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and ensure your answer is concise and relevant. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially sneakers. Over the past 5-6 years, since I became an adult, I usually buy two pairs of sneakers each year. Additionally, as a doctor, I purchase formal shoes for work and special events.

建議: Your answer has many filler words and some unclear phrases like "not a good mystery." Try to avoid fillers and use clear, precise language. Also, use linking words to explain the situation logically and coherently.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online from Apex, a well-known shoe brand in Bangladesh. However, the experience was disappointing because they sent me size 41 instead of my usual size 39, which did not fit me well.

建議: Your answer is quite confusing and contains many repetitions and filler words. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your budget preferences logically.

範例: I don't have a fixed budget for buying shoes; it depends on whether I like the shoes. However, I usually try to keep my spending within 5000 taka, which is about 40 to 50 US dollars.

建議: Your answer is good but contains many filler words and some repetition. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammatical errors like "a comfortable shoes" should be "comfortable shoes."

範例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Since I am a doctor, I wear fashionable and formal shoes for special occasions. However, for long hours at the hospital and daily activities, I choose comfortable shoes to stay relaxed.

× I feel like past 5-6 years when I came to adulthood I buy 2 sneakers and two eat.

✓ I feel like in the past 5-6 years since I came to adulthood, I have bought 2 pairs of sneakers and two pairs of shoes.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'buy' when referring to past actions. The correct tense is present perfect 'have bought' to indicate actions over a period up to now. Also, 'two eat' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'two pairs of shoes'. Use 'in the past' to indicate the time frame.

× I buy 2 sneakers and two eat.

✓ I buy 2 pairs of sneakers and two pairs of shoes.

The word 'sneakers' is plural, so it should be preceded by 'pairs of' to indicate quantity correctly. Also, 'two eat' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; corrected to 'two pairs of shoes' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I also uh buy some from my shoes as I'm a doctor for the formal events.

✓ And I also buy some shoes for formal events since I'm a doctor.

The phrase 'buy some from my shoes' is incorrect. The preposition 'from' is wrongly used here. The correct phrase is 'buy some shoes for formal events'. Also, 'as I'm a doctor' is better expressed as 'since I'm a doctor' to indicate reason.

× But that incident wasn't uh, good for me, uh, because there was a mishap on the side.

✓ But that incident wasn't good for me because there was a mishap with the order.

The phrase 'mishap on the side' is unclear and incorrect. The preposition 'on' is wrongly used. The correct expression is 'mishap with the order' or 'mishap regarding the order' to indicate the problem related to the purchase.

× I usually wear 39 size, but they send me 41 size.

✓ I usually wear size 39, but they sent me size 41.

The word 'size' should be preceded by the number without pluralization. Also, 'send' should be in past tense 'sent' because the action happened in the past.

× but they send me 41 size.

✓ but they sent me size 41.

The verb 'send' should be in past tense 'sent' to match the past event described.

× So it was not a uh, good mystery.

✓ So it was not a good experience.

The word 'mystery' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'experience' or 'situation'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it improves clarity.

× There's no fixed amount how much I will spend on buying shoes it depends on if I get to choose if it if I find the shoes of my liking uh it's flexible the budget, but within I I like to keep it within 5000 taka or even USD it's a 40 USD fifty USD.

✓ There's no fixed amount for how much I will spend on buying shoes. It depends on whether I find shoes I like. The budget is flexible, but I like to keep it within 5000 taka or around 40 to 50 USD.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. It lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions. Breaking it into shorter sentences and using correct conjunctions like 'whether' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer a comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

The article 'a' is singular and cannot be used with the plural noun 'shoes'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.