鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve fluency by combining ideas more naturally. Also, use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy buying new shoes and usually purchase them every semester because I like to keep my collection updated. For instance, Skechers is one of my favourite brands due to their comfort and style.

建議: Good direct answer with relevant details. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas and add more specific details about your experience to make your answer more engaging.

範例: Yes, I have bought many shoes online. For example, the last pair I purchased was formal shoes from Hush Puppies, which I often wear to the office because they are both stylish and comfortable.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by avoiding awkward phrasing and adding linking words. Also, clarify the currency and provide a reason to support your spending range.

範例: I usually spend around 100 to 200 dollars on shoes because I prioritise comfort, and this price range is typical for comfortable shoes from brands like Skechers.

建議: Good clear preference with supporting details. To improve, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to use more varied vocabulary.

範例: I prefer comfort over fashion because I usually choose shoes that are easy to wear and do not cause discomfort, even when I wear them for long hours.

× Sometimes I buy them in every semester.

✓ Sometimes I buy them every semester.

The phrase 'in every semester' is incorrect because 'every semester' already implies a recurring time frame without needing the preposition 'in'. Removing 'in' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× One of my favorite shoes brands is Skechers.

✓ One of my favorite shoe brands is Skechers.

The word 'shoes' should be singular 'shoe' when used as an adjective to describe 'brands'. 'Shoe brands' is the correct form to indicate brands that make shoes.

× Yes, I have bought many shoes online and the last one I bought online was from Hush Puppies brand.

✓ Yes, I have bought many pairs of shoes online and the last one I bought online was from the Hush Puppies brand.

'Many shoes' is less common; 'many pairs of shoes' is more precise. Also, 'Hush Puppies brand' needs the definite article 'the' before the brand name to be correct.

× It was formal shoes and I used to wear it for my office.

✓ They were formal shoes and I used to wear them to my office.

'Shoes' is plural, so pronouns referring to it should be plural ('they', 'them'). Also, 'used to wear it' is incorrect because 'it' refers to singular, but 'shoes' is plural. Additionally, 'for my office' should be 'to my office' to indicate destination.

× I would say around 100 to $200 because I always look for comfortable shoes and this is the basic range of these kind of shoes in Skechers.

✓ I would say around $100 to $200 because I always look for comfortable shoes and this is the basic range of this kind of shoe at Skechers.

The currency symbol '$' should precede the number. 'These kind of shoes' should be 'this kind of shoe' because 'kind' is singular. Also, 'in Skechers' should be 'at Skechers' to indicate the brand/store.

× I prefer comfort over fashion, so most of the time I go for something which is easy to wear and which does not have a lot of impact on my foot, even if I'm wearing for a long time.

✓ I prefer comfort over fashion, so most of the time I go for something which is easy to wear and which does not have a lot of impact on my feet, even if I wear it for a long time.

'Foot' should be plural 'feet' because shoes cover both feet. Also, 'I'm wearing for a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'I wear it for a long time' to correctly express the action and include the object 'it' referring to the shoes.