鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'I buy so quite rarely' không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers. I don't buy them very often, but when I do, it instantly lifts my mood and boosts my confidence.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu cuối 'That's why I still choose shopping online in the future' không tự nhiên. Nên dùng thì tương lai đơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's convenient and there are many good deals. Therefore, I will continue shopping online in the future.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng như 'I spending' thay vì 'I spend'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời không trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi về số tiền mà bạn thường chi tiêu. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn.

範例: I usually spend around 100 dollars on shoes because I believe it's a good way to treat myself and relieve stress.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I refer fashionable shoes', 'have me come up with chance', 'choose a separate', 'wear a pair of soap'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: I prefer fashionable shoes because they enhance my outfit. However, I also choose comfortable shoes when I do sports or want something that matches my casual clothes.

× Well I spending a lot of money on shoes and I think this is a great way to let my head out.

✓ Well I spend a lot of money on shoes and I think this is a great way to let my head out.

The verb 'spending' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct simple present tense form 'spend' should be used to match the subject 'I' and the present tense context.

× I tend to look for sneakers and I buy so quite rarely because it can lift my mood instantly and push my confidence whenever I wear a pair of shoes.

✓ I tend to look for sneakers and I buy them quite rarely because they can lift my mood instantly and boost my confidence whenever I wear a pair of shoes.

The pronoun 'so' is incorrectly used; 'them' is appropriate to refer to 'sneakers'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'sneakers'. Additionally, 'push my confidence' is incorrect; 'boost my confidence' is the correct collocation.

× That's why I still choose shopping online in the future.

✓ That's why I will still choose shopping online in the future.

The sentence refers to a future action, so the future tense 'will choose' should be used instead of the simple present 'choose' to correctly express future intention.

× However, there are times I want to choose a separate, for example when I participate in physical activities or when I just want wear a pair of soap that meet and match.

✓ However, there are times I want to choose a separate pair, for example when I participate in physical activities or when I just want to wear a pair of shoes that meet and match.

The phrase 'choose a separate' is incomplete; it should be 'choose a separate pair'. Also, 'want wear' is missing 'to' before the verb, and 'soap' is a typo for 'shoes'. The preposition 'to' is necessary before 'wear'.

× Well, I refer fashionable shoes because it can elevate my outfit and have me come up with chance.

✓ Well, I prefer fashionable shoes because they can elevate my outfit and give me a chance to stand out.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is the correct verb to express liking. The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The phrase 'have me come up with chance' is awkward and incorrect; 'give me a chance to stand out' is a clearer expression.