鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeleri ("Umm", "I mean") var. Cümle yapısını biraz daha akıcı hale getirmek için bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından bağlantı sözcükleriyle (ör. "usually", "for example") destekleyici detay verin ve maksimum 4-5 cümlede kalın. Ayrıca "2 shoes in a year" ifadesi yerine "two pairs" demek daha doğrudur.

範例: Yes, I do. I usually buy two pairs of shoes a year: one for summer and one for winter. I enjoy trying different styles, so I often choose shoes that suit seasonal outfits. For example, I prefer sandals in summer but sturdy trainers in winter.

建議: İyi fikirler var (zaman eksikliği, beden bilgisi), fakat ifade kısa ve bitmemiş hissi veriyor. Daha doğal ve tamamlanmış cümleler kurun; gerekirse sebep-sonuç ilişkisini bağlaçlarla gösterin ("because", "so", "however"). Ayrıca son cümleyi tamamlayın: "if it doesn't suit, I return it" gibi bir sonuç ekleyin.

範例: Yes, I buy shoes online most of the time because I don't have enough time to go to shops. I know my size well, so online shopping usually works for me. However, if a pair doesn't fit, I return it or exchange it for a different size.

建議: Cevap samimi ancak dilbilgisi ve zaman kullanımı hatalı ("haven't buy" -> "haven't bought", "last year I spend" -> "I spent"). Ayrıca fazla dolgu kelime var. Net ve doğru zamanlarla iki cümle kurun: mevcut durum + geçmişteki örnek maliyet. Gerekirse ortalama aralık verin.

範例: I haven't bought any shoes recently because I'm pregnant and my size has changed. Last year, for example, I spent about 1,000 Turkish liras on a pair of shoes, but usually I spend between 200 and 1,000 liras depending on the style.

建議: Cevap açık ama bazı ifadeler hatalı ("important than anything" -> "more important than anything", "can't veer very high heel shoes" -> anlam belirsiz). Nedeninizi açık ve düzgün dilbilgisiyle verin; bağlantı sözcükleri kullanın ("because", "so"). Eğer mümkünse bir örnek ekleyin.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is more important to me than fashion. I have a herniated disc, so I avoid very high heels and usually choose supportive shoes like low-heeled boots or cushioned trainers.

× I think I buy at least 2 shoes in a year, one for summer, one for winter and I really like to try different styles.

✓ I think I buy at least 2 pairs of shoes a year, one for summer and one for winter, and I really like to try different styles.

You used '2 shoes' which is incorrect for counting footwear types; the correct plural noun when counting items composed of two parts is 'pairs of shoes'. Also use 'a year' instead of 'in a year' for frequency. Suggestion: say '2 pairs of shoes a year' and include commas to separate clauses.

× So I buy shoes from the Internet. I know my size and if it doesn't suit.

✓ So I buy shoes from the Internet. I know my size, and if they don't fit, I return them.

The sentence 'if it doesn't suit' misuses 'it' and verb form. 'Shoes' is plural so use 'they' and the correct verb for clothing fit is 'fit' rather than 'suit'. Also complete the conditional idea: 'if they don't fit, I return them.' Suggestion: use 'they don't fit' or 'they don't suit me'.

× Well recently I haven't buy any shoes because of my pregnancy.

✓ Well, recently I haven't bought any shoes because of my pregnancy.

After 'have/has' you must use the past participle form 'bought', not the base form 'buy'. This is present perfect tense. Suggestion: use 'haven't bought' for actions up to now.

× My size has changed so I don't know about the prices nowadays but uh last year I spend umm 1000 Turkish liras for a pair of shoes.

✓ My size has changed, so I don't know about the prices nowadays, but last year I spent 1000 Turkish liras on a pair of shoes.

You used 'spend' which is present tense; past action should be 'spent' (past simple). Also use 'on a pair of shoes' rather than 'for a pair of shoes'. Suggestion: use 'I spent' for last year and 'on' for expenses.

× Well my comfort is important than anything so I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ Well, my comfort is more important than anything, so I prefer comfortable shoes.

Comparative structure needs 'more important than', not 'important than'. Suggestion: use 'more important than anything' to compare.

× Also I have herniated disc so I can't veer very high heel shoes and fashionable shoes are high heels almost all the time.

✓ Also I have a herniated disc, so I can't wear very high-heeled shoes, and fashionable shoes are high heels almost all the time.

Use the article 'a' before 'herniated disc'. 'Veer' is incorrect verb; the correct verb is 'wear'. Use adjective form 'high-heeled' to describe shoes. Suggestion: say 'I have a herniated disc, so I can't wear very high-heeled shoes.'