规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
Of course there are rules in every school in Vietnam and rules makes student more disciplined and to.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
I believe that rules are made for people to improve their behaviour and to make them more disciplined. So more disciplined means your behaviour, your thought will be good.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
I've met so many teachers, but there's one that impressed me with her kindness and her discipline in work, in doing her job. She cares so much for her students and she sometimes she asks me about my homework and help me to do with it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như 'rules makes' (phải là 'rules make').
範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school in Vietnam. For example, students must arrive on time and wear the school uniform. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 65.0建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.
範例: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because rules help improve their behavior. For instance, stricter rules about homework submission can encourage students to be more responsible.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'help me to do with it'. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn về cách giáo viên giúp bạn.
範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is kind and disciplined, and she often asks me about my homework. For example, she helped me understand difficult topics by explaining them clearly after class.
文法
× Of course there are rules in every school in Vietnam and rules makes student more disciplined and to.
✓ Of course there are rules in every school in Vietnam and rules make students more disciplined too.
The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject 'rules'. The word 'to' at the end is incorrect and should be 'too' to mean 'also'.
× She cares so much for her students and she sometimes she asks me about my homework and help me to do with it.
✓ She cares so much for her students and sometimes she asks me about my homework and helps me to do it.
The sentence has redundant 'she' after 'and'. Also, the verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. The phrase 'help me to do with it' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to do it' or simply 'helps me with it'.
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