规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“there were a lot of rules I need to pay”应为“there were a lot of rules I needed to follow”。此外，表达不够自然，且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余。可以更具体地说明规则如何影响你的感受。

範例: Yes, definitely. When I was in primary school, we had many rules to follow, such as wearing uniforms and sticking to the timetable. These rules helped me stay organized, but sometimes they made me feel a bit stressed.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“yours can build the scale of self-control”不明确，且“more strict”应为“too strict”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达观点时要清楚并提供具体理由。

範例: It depends. Having some rules can help students develop self-control and confidence, but if the rules are too strict, they might feel pressured and less motivated.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“have a lot of experiences”应为“have a lot of experience”，且“make me progress”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加细节说明老师如何帮助你进步。

範例: Yes, I do. I have met many experienced teachers who are good at teaching. They are very supportive and have helped me improve my skills significantly.

× When I was in primary school there were a lot of rules I need to pay, such as real uniforms and following the timetable, which made me feel productive but stressful.

✓ When I was in primary school there were a lot of rules I needed to follow, such as wearing real uniforms and following the timetable, which made me feel productive but stressed.

句子中描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。'need' 应改为过去式 'needed'，'pay' 应改为 'follow'（遵守规则），'real uniforms' 应改为 'wearing real uniforms'，'stressful' 形容物，描述感受应使用 'stressed'。建议注意动词时态和词汇搭配。

× Sometimes yours can build the scale of self-control and confidence, but if there are more strict I think it's not beneficial.

✓ Sometimes rules can build the scale of self-control and confidence, but if there are more strict rules, I think it's not beneficial.

句中 'yours' 用词错误，应为 'rules'。'more strict' 应为 'stricter'，形容词比较级形式。建议注意情态动词和形容词比较级的正确使用。

× Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

✓ Do you have a teacher who does their job very well?

现代英语中，为避免性别歧视，常用单数they代替his or her。建议使用 'their' 代替 'his or her'。

× I met many teachers who have a lot of experiences and good at teaching.

✓ I met many teachers who have a lot of experience and are good at teaching.

'experiences' 应为不可数名词 'experience'，'good at teaching' 前缺少动词 'are'。建议注意名词单复数和句子结构完整性。

× They are very helpful and make me progress.

✓ They are very helpful and help me make progress.

'make me progress' 结构不正确，应为 'help me make progress'。建议注意句子结构和动词搭配。