规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'student must to wear'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a dress code when they come to school. In addition, they have to be punctual and attend classes on time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự liên kết logic. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ ý, đồng thời tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'morals' khi nói về quy tắc.

範例: Yes, I believe that having more rules can benefit students because rules help create a better learning environment. Moreover, they encourage students to behave properly and respect others.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'She she' và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về giáo viên.

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is a professional English teacher who taught me during secondary school. She always explained difficult lessons clearly and helped me improve a lot.

× my schools have many rules that student must to wear dress code to go to school

✓ my school has many rules that students must wear a dress code to go to school

The noun 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context. 'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to all students. Also, 'must to wear' is incorrect; 'must' is followed directly by the base verb 'wear'. Additionally, 'dress code' needs an article 'a' before it.

× student must to wear dress code to go to school

✓ students must wear a dress code to go to school

'Must' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Therefore, 'must to wear' is incorrect; it should be 'must wear'.

× students must go to classes on time

✓ students must go to class on time

'Classes' can be plural, but in this context, 'go to class' is the common expression meaning attending lessons, so singular 'class' is preferred.

× I think students have more benefits from morals because morals can create a better learning environment for everyone

✓ I think students benefit more from morals because morals can create a better learning environment for everyone

'Have more benefits from' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'benefit from'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× students can behave properly which

✓ students can behave properly

The sentence ends abruptly with 'which' without completing the clause, making it incomplete. Removing 'which' corrects the sentence structure.

× She she taught my English during my secondary school and every difficult lessons too

✓ She taught me English during my secondary school and every difficult lesson too

The repeated 'She' is a typo. 'My English' should be 'me English' because 'teach' takes an indirect object pronoun. 'Lessons' should be singular 'lesson' to match 'every', which is singular.