规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น "must must" และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For instance, all students must wear uniforms, including black shoes and white socks, to maintain a formal appearance.

建議: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น แก้คำว่า "Rose" เป็น "rules" และขยายคำตอบโดยใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined. Moreover, following social rules enables them to fit in better with others.

建議: ควรใช้รูปประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "medical student" และ "good doctors" ควรเป็น "good doctors in the future" รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเหมาะสมเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน

範例: Yes, as a medical student, I have many dedicated teachers. They spend more than 10 hours a day teaching us to become good doctors. Moreover, they also devote time to caring for their patients.

建議: ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "a few rules" แทน "few rules" และปรับประโยคให้กระชับ พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

範例: Well, as a student, I prefer to have a few rules at school because it allows me to wear any shirts or pants I like. I think it's more comfortable to dress freely at school.

× Thus, several rules for students in my university.

✓ Thus, there are several rules for students in my university.

The original sentence lacks a verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'there are' completes the sentence structure and correctly introduces the existence of rules.

× all students must must wear uniforms and they must wear black shoes with white socks.

✓ all students must wear uniforms and they must wear black shoes with white socks.

The modal verb 'must' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate 'must' corrects the sentence.

× I think yes because Rose help student to be more disciplined and follow the social rules to be able to fit in with others.

✓ I think yes because rules help students to be more disciplined and follow social rules to be able to fit in with others.

'Rose' is likely a typo for 'rules'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject. Correcting these pronouns and nouns improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, as a medical students, I know a lot of dedicated teachers.

✓ Yes, as a medical student, I know a lot of dedicated teachers.

'Students' is plural but the article 'a' indicates singular. Changing 'students' to 'student' matches the singular article.

× They spend more than 10 hours a day to teach students to be a good doctors in the futures.

✓ They spend more than 10 hours a day teaching students to be good doctors in the future.

The phrase 'to teach' should be changed to the gerund 'teaching' after 'spend'. Also, 'a good doctors' is incorrect; 'good doctors' is plural without 'a'. 'Futures' should be singular 'future'.

× Moreover, they spend all their time looking after their patient as well.

✓ Moreover, they spend all their time looking after their patients as well.

'Patient' should be plural 'patients' to agree with the plural possessive pronoun 'their'.

× Well as a student I prefer to have few rules at school so that I can wear any shirts or pants that I like to schools and I think it's more comfortable to dress just anything to school.

✓ Well, as a student, I prefer to have few rules at school so that I can wear any shirts or pants that I like to school and I think it's more comfortable to dress in just anything to school.

'Schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context. Also, adding commas after introductory phrases improves readability. 'Dress just anything to school' is awkward; 'dress in just anything to school' is more natural.