规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit lengthy. Try to respond directly and clearly with a topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

範例: Yes, my school has many rules to maintain discipline. For example, students must wear uniforms and attend classes on time, which helps create a good learning environment.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas. Also, be specific and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they encourage discipline. For example, rules about completing homework on time help students stay focused and improve their performance.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, use correct pronouns and verb forms.

範例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher named Mrs. Kanchan when I was in middle school. She was strict but always motivated us and was ready to help whenever we needed assistance.

建議: Your answer is too long and contains unclear phrases. Use simpler sentences and linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion clearly. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

範例: I don't prefer having more or fewer rules at school because too many rules can limit students' freedom. This might cause negative feelings towards teachers and reduce students' motivation.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons and check subject-verb agreement.

範例: Yes, I had a strict mathematics teacher named Kuldeep in 10th standard because math requires careful attention to complex calculations.

建議: Your answer is a bit long and has grammatical mistakes. Use clear sentences with linking words like 'but' and 'because' to express your ideas logically. Also, avoid awkward phrases.

範例: To be honest, I don't want to work as a teacher because it is a difficult job that requires patience. However, if I had to, I would prefer to teach in a rule-free school because I find it hard to enforce strict rules.

× Yes, there are many rules at my school when I was at my earlier age and I think it is the best way for school authority to control students through the medium of rules.

✓ Yes, there were many rules at my school when I was at an earlier age and I think it is the best way for the school authority to control students through the medium of rules.

The sentence mixes present tense 'are' with a past time reference 'when I was at my earlier age'. The verb 'are' should be in past tense 'were' to match the past time frame. Also, 'at my earlier age' is better expressed as 'at an earlier age'.

× Yes definitely student would benefit more from more roles because if they are in the roles they get restricted and they can controlled by their teacher to do well.

✓ Yes definitely students would benefit more from more rules because if they are under the rules they get restricted and they can be controlled by their teacher to do well.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'roles' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'rules'. 'Can controlled' is incorrect; it should be 'can be controlled' to form the passive voice correctly.

× Such as the role of those students who not complete their work and they get finished from their teacher.

✓ Such as the role of those students who do not complete their work and they get punished by their teacher.

The phrase 'get finished from their teacher' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'get punished by their teacher'. Also, 'role' should be 'rule' in this context.

× I think it helped to maintain environment.

✓ I think it helps to maintain the environment.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'environment'. Also, since the context is general, present tense 'helps' is more appropriate than past tense 'helped'.

× Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was in Midwest Standard and her name was uh Missus Kanchan and his very restricted along with the dedicated he motivated students to do well.

✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was in Midwest Standard and her name was Missus Kanchan. She was very strict but dedicated and motivated students to do well.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect referring to a female teacher; it should be 'she'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'Restricted' is incorrect; 'strict' is the correct adjective.

× Even he always ready for help too all the students.

✓ She was always ready to help all the students as well.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect for a female teacher; it should be 'she'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'ready for help' should be 'ready to help'.

× No, I don't prefer to have a more or fewer roles at school because it restrict the students flexibility and I think it also impact on students mind in negative manner or they think wrote thoughts about towards their teacher and that great dissatisfaction among the students.

✓ No, I don't prefer to have more or fewer rules at school because it restricts the students' flexibility and I think it also impacts students' minds in a negative manner, or they think wrong thoughts about their teacher, which causes great dissatisfaction among the students.

'Roles' should be 'rules'. 'Restrict' and 'impact' need to be in third person singular form 'restricts' and 'impacts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Possessive forms 'students'' and 'students' minds' need apostrophes. 'Wrote thoughts' is incorrect; it should be 'wrong thoughts'. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, I had a really strict teacher when I was in my 10th standard whose name is Kuldeep and he taught us mathematics.

✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher when I was in my 10th standard whose name was Kuldeep and he taught us mathematics.

Since the time is in the past, 'is' should be changed to 'was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I think the teacher of this subject are obviously strict due to the level of the complexity of calculation.

✓ I think the teachers of this subject are obviously strict due to the level of complexity of calculations.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'are'. 'Calculation' should be plural 'calculations' to match the context.

× To be honest, I don't like to be work as a teacher because I think the job of teacher is quite difficult and require a lot of patience.

✓ To be honest, I don't like to work as a teacher because I think the job of a teacher is quite difficult and requires a lot of patience.

'Like to be work' is incorrect; it should be 'like to work'. 'Job of teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'job'.

× But if I get the chance and I compelled to do a job of teacher, then I prioritize to do a job of teacher in Rule free school because I have not the capability to put restriction on.

✓ But if I get the chance and I am compelled to do the job of a teacher, then I would prioritize doing the job of a teacher in a rule-free school because I do not have the capability to put restrictions on.

'I compelled' should be 'I am compelled' to form correct passive voice. 'Prioritize to do' should be 'prioritize doing'. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated 'rule-free'. 'I have not the capability' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not have the capability'. 'Restriction' should be plural 'restrictions'.