规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'students must not be absent or late' thay vì 'the student must then absent or to be late'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: There are several important rules at my school. Firstly, students must show respect to their teachers by greeting them whenever they meet. Secondly, punctuality is required, so students must not be absent or late for lessons.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh. Ví dụ, 'Bruce' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc phát âm sai. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như 'rules' thay vì 'Bruce'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students learn more effectively and develop self-discipline. Moreover, these rules can improve their time management skills, which are essential for their future work in a professional environment.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để thể hiện ý tưởng rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher during secondary school. She was extremely supportive and often spent extra time after class explaining difficult topics, which helped me understand better. Because of her dedication, I was inspired to become a teacher myself.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, 'students discipline' nên là 'students' discipline' và tránh lỗi như 'there are some rules are which are unnecessary'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I think many rules at my school help to maintain students' discipline. However, some rules are unnecessary. For instance, students are not allowed to bring children to celebrate birthdays, which I believe should be removed to make the school atmosphere more enjoyable.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'perform wells' nên là 'perform well'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher when I was in primary school. He often punished me whenever I made mistakes, which made me feel nervous during his lessons. However, I always tried my best to perform well in his class.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'UH groove free school'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: I currently work as a teacher, and I don't think working in a rule-free school would be effective. Since students are still young, they need clear rules to guide their behavior and help them develop self-discipline, which is essential for quality learning.

× The first one is really important that students must show their respect to their teachers by greeting them whenever they met and the second one is to be punctual because the student must then absent or to be late in the lesson.

✓ The first one is really important: students must show their respect to their teachers by greeting them whenever they meet, and the second one is to be punctual because the students must not be absent or late in the lesson.

The verb 'met' is incorrect because it is past tense; it should be 'meet' to agree with the present tense context. Also, 'the student must then absent or to be late' is incorrect; it should be 'the students must not be absent or late' to express prohibition correctly and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Actually yes, because Bruce helped the student to learn more effectively and develop their self-discipline.

✓ Actually yes, because rules help students to learn more effectively and develop their self-discipline.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'student' and a proper noun 'Bruce' which seems out of context. It should be plural 'students' to match the general statement about rules benefiting students. Also, 'Bruce' seems to be a typo or error.

× In addition, they also built their time management skills which is very essential for them in the future to work more effectively in the rational environment.

✓ In addition, they also build their time management skills, which are very essential for them in the future to work more effectively in a rational environment.

The verb 'built' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'build' to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'the rational environment' is incorrect; it should be 'a rational environment' because it is a general environment, not a specific one.

× I had an English teacher when I was a secondary school student.

✓ I had an English teacher when I was a secondary school student.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× She spent time after class to explain difficult topics to me so that I could understand clearly.

✓ She spent time after class explaining difficult topics to me so that I could understand clearly.

The phrase 'to explain' is less natural here; using the gerund 'explaining' fits better after 'spent time'.

× I can see many rules at my school work properly to form students discipline.

✓ I can see many rules at my school working properly to form students' discipline.

The verb 'work' should be 'working' to correctly modify 'rules'. Also, 'students discipline' should be 'students' discipline' to show possession.

× However, there are some rules are which are unnecessary.

✓ However, there are some rules which are unnecessary.

The phrase 'are some rules are which' is incorrect; the correct order is 'there are some rules which'.

× For example, at my school students are not allowed to bring kids to celebrate birthday.

✓ For example, at my school, students are not allowed to bring children to celebrate birthdays.

'Kids' is informal; 'children' is more appropriate. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to generalize the event.

× I consider it should be removed to ensure the school atmosphere more enjoyable.

✓ I consider it should be removed to ensure the school atmosphere is more enjoyable.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link 'school atmosphere' and 'more enjoyable'.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The correct short answer to 'Have you ever had...' is 'Yes, I have' or 'Yes, I did' depending on the question form. 'Yes, I had' is incorrect.

× But I tried my best to perform wells in his lesson.

✓ But I tried my best to perform well in his lesson.

The adverb 'well' is misspelled as 'wells' and should be placed after 'perform'.

× I don't think working an UH groove free school would be effective because students are still very young to understand completely about self-discipline, so school should have clear rules to set their behavior to ensure the quality of their studying.

✓ I don't think working at a rule-free school would be effective because students are still very young to completely understand self-discipline, so schools should have clear rules to set their behavior to ensure the quality of their studying.

The phrase 'working an UH groove free school' is incorrect; it should be 'working at a rule-free school'. Also, 'understand completely about self-discipline' should be 'completely understand self-discipline'. 'School' should be plural 'schools' to generalize.