规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用更准确的表达说明规则的重要性。

範例: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, graduate students must not plagiarize papers or research, which is essential to maintain academic integrity.

建議: 回答不完整且含糊，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议明确表达观点，并用连接词补充理由。

範例: Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because discipline is difficult to maintain, and clear rules can help guide their behavior effectively.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议用完整句子描述老师的特点，并提供具体例子。

範例: Yes, I have. One of my biostatistics teachers was very dedicated and hardworking. He was the most responsible teacher I have ever had because he always helped students outside class.

建議: 回答简单且不够正式，缺少支持细节。建议用更正式的语言表达观点，并说明原因。

範例: Personally, I prefer fewer rules at school because I value freedom and believe that too many rules can restrict students' creativity.

建議: 回答含糊且语法不准确，缺少具体细节。建议直接回答并举例说明严格老师的经历。

範例: Yes, I have had strict teachers, especially in high school. For example, my math teacher was very strict about homework and punctuality.

建議: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多。建议清晰表达观点，使用连贯句子说明规则的重要性。

範例: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because rules help people behave properly and work effectively.

× Yes, of course, as graduate students are we are required to not copy other papers, research studies, all things like that.

✓ Yes, of course, as graduate students, we are required not to copy other papers, research studies, and things like that.

The phrase 'are we are required to not copy' is incorrect. The correct form is 'we are required not to copy' because 'required' is followed by the infinitive form without 'to' before 'not'. Also, a comma is needed after 'graduate students' for clarity.

× It is is an essential role in academic field.

✓ It is an essential role in the academic field.

The phrase 'in academic field' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'academic field' because it refers to a specific field. Also, there is a repeated 'is' which should be corrected.

× As of course, uh, perhaps, you know, I think discipline is a hard thing to follow, so maybe more rules can help students to, uh.

✓ Of course, I think discipline is hard to follow, so maybe more rules can help students.

The original sentence has unnecessary fillers and awkward structure. Removing filler words and simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× One of my biostatistic teachers, uh, he is very dedicated and hard work.

✓ One of my biostatistics teachers, he is very dedicated and hardworking.

'Biostatistic' should be 'biostatistics' as it is a field of study. 'Hard work' is a noun phrase, but here an adjective is needed, so 'hardworking' is correct.

× I think he is uh, uh, most, uh, responsible teacher in my whole life.

✓ I think he is the most responsible teacher in my whole life.

Superlative adjectives like 'most responsible' require the definite article 'the' before them.

× Well, for me personally, I prefer to have few rules at school because I'm a person who doesn't like any rules to obey.

✓ Well, for me personally, I prefer to have a few rules at school because I'm a person who doesn't like to obey any rules.

'Few rules' without an article implies almost none, but 'a few rules' means some, which fits better here. Also, 'rules to obey' is awkward; 'to obey any rules' is more natural.

× Yes, of course, as a Chinese student, we all have ever had a really strict teacher, uh, perhaps in primary school or in high school.

✓ Yes, of course, as Chinese students, we have all had really strict teachers, perhaps in primary school or high school.

The subject shifts from singular 'a Chinese student' to plural 'we all'. Consistency requires plural 'Chinese students' and plural 'teachers'. Also, 'have ever had' is awkward; 'have all had' is better.

× I do have that thought that sort of teachers when I was in high school.

✓ I do have that thought about those sorts of teachers when I was in high school.

The phrase 'that sort of teachers' is ungrammatical; it should be 'those sorts of teachers' to match plural. Also, 'have that thought about' is the correct collocation.

× Not really. I think rule can ask people do something, you know, just be right.

✓ Not really. I think rules can ask people to do something, you know, just to be right.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules'. Also, 'ask people do' is incorrect; it should be 'ask people to do'. The infinitive 'to do' is required after 'ask'.

× If a school without any rule, I think uh it's a good uh uh school to uh H do work effect effectively.

✓ If a school has no rules, I think it would not be a good school to work effectively.

The original sentence lacks a verb in the 'if' clause and is unclear. Adding 'has' completes the clause. Also, 'do work effect effectively' is incorrect; 'work effectively' is correct. The meaning is clarified accordingly.