规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「words」ではなく「rules」を使うべきです。また、文を簡潔にし、明確な主語と動詞を使うことが重要です。

範例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and follow the teachers' instructions.

建議: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「morals」と「rules」の使い方が混乱しています。文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I believe more rules help students become independent and learn to follow instructions properly.

建議: 「delicate」は不適切な語彙です。「dedicated」を使い、文法的に正しい表現を心がけましょう。また、具体的なエピソードを加えると良いです。

範例: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher in high school who encouraged me to study harder and improve my skills.

建議: 「girls」は文脈に合っていません。意味が伝わりにくいので、理由を明確にし、文法を正しく使う練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer more rules at school because they help students follow instructions and learn discipline.

建議: 「stricted」や「impers」は誤った語彙です。正しい形容詞や動詞を使い、文を簡潔にしましょう。

範例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school who gave me difficult tasks every day that I had to complete.

建議: 「law free」や「role free」は誤りです。「rule-free」が正しいです。文法と語彙の正確さを意識し、理由を明確に述べましょう。

範例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it would allow me to work flexibly and independently.

× Yes, in my school there are a lot of words for students or for example, I have to wear uniforms when I go to school and I have to, uh, obey and teacher said.

✓ Yes, in my school there are a lot of rules for students. For example, I have to wear uniforms when I go to school and I have to obey what the teacher says.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'words' instead of 'rules' and has a confusing structure. 'There are a lot of rules' is the correct expression to indicate existence. Also, 'obey and teacher said' is incorrect; it should be 'obey what the teacher says' to correctly express following instructions.

× Yes, I think students would benefit more from morals because rule makes provide student a independence and learning to obey the inter instructions so.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from rules because rules provide students with independence and help them learn to obey the instructions.

The sentence misuses 'morals' instead of 'rules' and has incorrect modal verb and article usage. 'Rule makes provide student a independence' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'rules provide students with independence'. Also, 'inter instructions' is likely a typo for 'instructions'.

× Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher UMM in my high school umm. I met umm very delicate maths teacher UMM. She has encouraged me to learn math more harder.

✓ Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in my high school. I met a very dedicated math teacher. She encouraged me to learn math harder.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'has encouraged' which is present perfect tense; past simple 'encouraged' fits better here. Also, 'more harder' is incorrect; 'harder' alone is sufficient. 'Delicate' is a wrong adjective; 'dedicated' is correct.

× Uh, I prefer more rules at school umm, because I think girls, umm makes students to follow instructions or rules and so I think it is important for students to learn these things.

✓ Uh, I prefer more rules at school because I think rules help students follow instructions, and so I think it is important for students to learn these things.

The original sentence uses 'girls' incorrectly instead of 'rules'. Also, 'makes students to follow' is incorrect; it should be 'help students follow'. The quantifier 'more' is correctly used with 'rules'.

× Yes, I have a very strict teacher, uh, in my high school. Uh, my teacher is very stricted and for example, she impers me, uh, very difficult task every day and I had to do.

✓ Yes, I had a very strict teacher in my high school. My teacher was very strict and, for example, she gave me very difficult tasks every day that I had to do.

'Stricted' is not a word; the correct adjective is 'strict'. 'Impers me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'gave me'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'very difficult' and the context.

× Yes, I want to work as a teacher in law free school because, uh, if a role free school, I can work, umm, flexibly and independent, so I can work as my want to do and.

✓ Yes, I want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because, if it is a rule-free school, I can work flexibly and independently, so I can work as I want to.

The phrase 'law free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'If a role free school' is incorrect; it should be 'if it is a rule-free school'. 'Independent' should be the adverb 'independently' to modify 'work'. The sentence ending is incomplete and corrected for clarity.