规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly with correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: When I was in school, there were several rules that students had to follow. For example, we were not allowed to carry smartphones, and we had to walk in a proper line in the corridors. These rules helped maintain discipline and order among students.

建議: Your answer conveys the idea but is a bit wordy and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use simpler sentences with correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because they help maintain discipline. When students follow rules, they can complete tasks in an orderly way and develop good habits.

建議: Your answer has confusion in pronouns and unclear sentences. Make sure to use correct pronouns and sentence structure. Also, provide specific details clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Sangeetha when I was in 8th grade. She was strict about rules, such as giving a test every Saturday. All students had to follow this rule, which helped us stay consistent in our studies.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so that'. Keep your sentences concise and grammatically correct.

範例: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students maintain discipline. When there are clear rules, students can follow proper order in their activities, which creates a better learning environment.

建議: Your answer repeats previous information and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repetition and use correct pronouns and sentence structures. Provide clear and specific examples with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I had a strict teacher named Sangeeta in 8th grade. She enforced rules strictly, such as weekly tests that every student had to take. This helped us stay disciplined and focused on our studies.

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and has grammatical errors. Try to use shorter sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain your reasons clearly and logically.

範例: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without clear rules, students may lack discipline. This makes it difficult for teachers to manage the class, and students might behave irresponsibly.

× when I was in school there are multiple rules which should be obeyed by the children

✓ when I was in school there were multiple rules which should be obeyed by the children

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in school'), so the verb 'are' should be in past tense 'were' to agree with the past context.

× children should not carry their smartphone in the school

✓ children should not carry their smartphones to school

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'to school' is the correct phrase to indicate carrying something when going to school. Also, 'smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'children'.

× they should be go in a proper line, in a corridor and many more

✓ they should go in a proper line, in the corridor, and many more

The phrase 'should be go' is incorrect; it should be 'should go'. Also, 'in a corridor' should be 'in the corridor' if referring to a specific corridor. 'Many more' is vague but kept as is.

× rules plays a very important role in any individual's life even in the student

✓ rules play a very important role in any individual's life even in the student

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'play' not 'plays' to agree in number.

× there was a teacher who named us Sangeetha

✓ there was a teacher who was named Sangeetha

The phrase 'who named us Sangeetha' incorrectly suggests the teacher named the students. The intended meaning is the teacher's name is Sangeetha, so 'who was named Sangeetha' is correct.

× He was quite strict about the rules that she had made because each and every student must have to follow

✓ She was quite strict about the rules that she had made because each and every student had to follow them

The teacher is female (named Sangeetha), so pronouns should be 'she' not 'he'. Also, 'must have to follow' is incorrect; 'had to follow' is appropriate past tense modal expression.

× she had made a rule to give a test every week on Saturday and we should follow and give that test in

✓ she had made a rule to give a test every week on Saturday and we had to follow and take that test

The phrase 'give that test in' is incomplete and awkward. 'Take that test' is the correct expression. Also, 'we should follow' is better as 'we had to follow' to match past tense.

× There is a specific reason behind this as if there are more rules, the student must follow a proper order and maintain a good discipline among each of them and in every activities the student

✓ There is a specific reason behind this: if there are more rules, the students must follow a proper order and maintain good discipline among themselves and in every activity

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistency: 'the student' should be 'the students' to match plural 'rules'. Also, 'a good discipline' should be 'good discipline' without article. 'Each of them' is better expressed as 'among themselves'. 'Every activities' should be 'every activity' (singular).

× there was a teacher when I was in 8th class who named as Sangeeta

✓ there was a teacher when I was in 8th class who was named Sangeeta

Similar to previous, 'named as' is incorrect; correct is 'was named'. Also, 'Sangeeta' spelling corrected for consistency.

× He was quite strict about the rules that every student must have to follow

✓ She was quite strict about the rules that every student had to follow

The teacher is female, so pronoun should be 'she'. Also, 'must have to follow' is incorrect; 'had to follow' is correct past tense modal usage.

× there was a rule of giving test by the student each and every week and every student must have to follow that

✓ there was a rule that students had to give a test every week and every student had to follow that

The phrase 'rule of giving test by the student' is awkward; better is 'rule that students had to give a test'. Also, 'must have to follow' is incorrect; 'had to follow' is correct past tense modal.

× I do not think I can work as a teacher in a rule free school because without specific or clear rules it is difficult for the student and teacher

✓ I do not think I can work as a teacher in a rule-free school because without specific or clear rules it is difficult for the students and teachers

'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. Also, 'student and teacher' should be plural 'students and teachers' to generalize.

× because student lacks quite discipline and teacher can't handle that and student can do anything which they want without any specific rule

✓ because students lack discipline and teachers can't handle that and students can do anything they want without any specific rule

Subjects 'student' and 'teacher' should be plural 'students' and 'teachers' to match the context. 'Lacks quite discipline' is incorrect; correct is 'lack discipline'. Also, 'which they want' should be 'they want'.