规则— Part 1 評分報告

× when I was in high school students, I usually I should wear my school uniform or should not run in the corridor.

✓ when I was a high school student, I usually had to wear my school uniform and was not allowed to run in the corridor.

The phrase 'in high school students' incorrectly uses the plural 'students' instead of the singular 'student' to refer to the speaker's status. Also, 'should' is misused here; 'had to' better expresses obligation in past tense. The sentence also needed conjunction correction for clarity.

× clear guideline can reduce destruction and encourage students to manage their time efficiently either.

✓ clear guidelines can reduce disruption and encourage students to manage their time efficiently as well.

The singular 'guideline' should be plural 'guidelines' to match the context. 'Destruction' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'disruption'. 'Either' is incorrectly used; 'as well' fits better in this context.

× my teacher always dedicated to me and I can't help to go university.

✓ my teacher was always dedicated to me and I couldn't help but go to university.

The verb 'dedicated' requires the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past tense passive structure. 'Can't help to go' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'couldn't help but go'. Also, 'go university' needs the preposition 'to' before 'university'.

× I think stick colors and more loose is good for me because in student more rules can help not to discrimination or fighting fight.

✓ I think strict rules and more freedom are good for me because more rules can help prevent discrimination or fighting among students.

'Stick colors' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'strict rules'. 'More loose' should be 'more freedom' or 'more leniency'. The phrase 'help not to discrimination or fighting fight' is ungrammatical; it should be 'help prevent discrimination or fighting'. The sentence structure and word choice needed correction for clarity.

× My mathematic teachers very restrict Berry sticks.

✓ My math teacher was very strict and strict with rules.

'Mathematic teachers' should be 'math teacher' (singular). 'Very restrict Berry sticks' is nonsensical; likely intended 'very strict'. The sentence needed restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× rules or regulations is essential for school because students are not mature so rules can help them.

✓ rules or regulations are essential for school because students are not mature, so rules can help them.

The subject 'rules or regulations' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.