规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, clearly state the rules and explain them briefly using linking words.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to bring mobile phones into the classroom, and eating during class is prohibited. Additionally, all students must wear the same uniform to maintain discipline.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence, and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons, use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid filler words. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

範例: I believe students should have some freedom because too many rules can cause stress. For example, if students feel pressured, they might lose motivation and perform poorly in school.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question about a dedicated teacher. Focus on answering the question clearly with relevant details, and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid irrelevant information.

範例: Yes, I have had dedicated teachers, especially in high school. For instance, my math teacher always spent extra time helping me understand difficult topics, which motivated me to improve.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: I prefer a balance between rules and freedom at school. Teachers should guide students properly without putting too much pressure, so students can focus better on their studies.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to answer the question directly, using simple and correct sentences. Provide specific examples if possible, and avoid irrelevant information.

範例: I have never had a very strict teacher myself. However, I know that some schools have teachers who are very strict and sometimes unfair to certain students.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words and informal language. Try to express your opinion clearly and formally, avoid fillers, and provide reasons with linking words to make your answer more effective.

範例: Honestly, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because teaching requires a lot of responsibility and focus. Without rules, it might be difficult to maintain order and help students learn effectively.

× Yeah, there are several rules When I was in school, for example, you have not able to get your, your mobile phone to enter your classroom and also, uh, not eating food during the class and you have to uh, each student's similar at the class.

✓ Yeah, there are several rules when I was in school. For example, you were not able to bring your mobile phone into your classroom, and also, you were not allowed to eat food during class, and each student had to be similar in the class.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you have not able' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'you were not able' to indicate past ability. Also, 'to get your mobile phone to enter your classroom' is unclear; it should be 'bring your mobile phone into your classroom.' The sentence is also a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I don't know specially, uh, I think the students should be free for whatever they are wanted because if they are pressure about anythings, they may behave schools or they were not able to wake up every morning.

✓ I don't know, especially, I think the students should be free to do whatever they want because if they are under pressure about anything, they may misbehave at school or they may not be able to wake up every morning.

The phrase 'should be free for whatever they are wanted' is incorrect; it should be 'free to do whatever they want' using the correct infinitive form after 'free.' Also, 'if they are pressure about anythings' should be 'if they are under pressure about anything.' The modal verb 'may' is correctly used but the sentence structure needs correction.

× Yeah, I have many of teachers, especially during my high school, I always struggles with the teachers that are focusing on my clothes wearing and also they're trying to tell me to not talking with your friends or not doing anything.

✓ Yeah, I had many teachers, especially during my high school. I always struggled with teachers who focused on my clothes and also tried to tell me not to talk with my friends or do anything else.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I have many of teachers' should be 'I had many teachers' to match the past time frame. 'I always struggles' should be 'I always struggled' for subject-verb agreement and past tense. 'Trying to tell me to not talking' is incorrect; it should be 'tried to tell me not to talk'.

× I prefer they have to balance between the rules and the study. Uh, this teachers should advise the students in a correct way.

✓ I prefer there to be a balance between the rules and the study. These teachers should advise the students in a correct way.

'I prefer they have to balance' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I prefer there to be a balance.' Also, 'this teachers' is incorrect because 'this' is singular and 'teachers' is plural; it should be 'these teachers.'

× Try don't put a lot of pressure on them in order to not have the schools and be attention of them study.

✓ They should not put a lot of pressure on them in order to avoid school stress and to help them pay attention to their studies.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'Try don't put' is incorrect; it should be 'They should not put.' 'In order to not have the schools' is unclear; 'avoid school stress' is clearer. 'Be attention of them study' is incorrect; it should be 'help them pay attention to their studies.'

× I never have very strict teacher but many schools in my country they found a very bad teacher's behaviours and they are focusing with the specific student and the not able to them to be free from them acting are studying so for mine.

✓ I have never had a very strict teacher, but many schools in my country have found very bad teacher behaviors. They focus on specific students and do not allow them to be free from their actions or studying, at least in my experience.

'I never have very strict teacher' should be 'I have never had a very strict teacher' to use the correct tense and article. 'Teacher's behaviours' should be 'teacher behaviors' (plural). 'They are focusing with the specific student' should be 'They focus on specific students.' The sentence is also run-on and unclear, so it was rephrased for clarity.

× Umm, to be honest, I don't wanna be a teacher in the future because I, I hate to take pressure on myself.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I hate taking pressure on myself.

'I don't wanna' is informal; 'I don't want to' is more appropriate. 'I hate to take pressure on myself' is awkward; the correct form is 'I hate taking pressure on myself' using the gerund after 'hate.'

× And, uh, it's such a joke. You have to take the high amount of responsibility and it required a lot of time and you have to focus.

✓ And, uh, it's such a joke. You have to take a high amount of responsibility, and it requires a lot of time and focus.

'The high amount' should be 'a high amount' because 'amount' is a non-count noun and needs an indefinite article. 'It required' should be 'it requires' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'you have to focus' is better combined with the previous clause for clarity.