规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các quy tắc và tác dụng của chúng.

範例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, running in the hallways, smoking, arguing, and fighting are all prohibited. I believe these rules are essential because they help reduce conflicts and create a better environment for studying.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh, có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Đồng thời, hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của các quy tắc.

範例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Rules help maintain discipline and encourage students to behave properly. If students break the rules, they may face punishments, which motivates them to follow the guidelines and focus on their studies.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đúng để mô tả giáo viên tận tâm và cách họ giúp bạn.

範例: Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher who is currently teaching me. His name is Mr. Minh. He cares a lot about all his students, especially me, because I struggle with physics. He spends extra time helping me understand the subject better.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "hilarious" khi nói về quy tắc. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

範例: I think it depends. Some rules at my school, like no running, seem unnecessary and a bit strange. However, I believe the school should enforce stricter rules about smoking to protect students' health.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời mô tả rõ hơn về giáo viên nghiêm khắc và cảm nhận của bạn.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher when I was in eighth grade. His name was Mr. Tran. He was often angry about our test results, and many students in the class did not like him because of his strictness.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để diễn đạt ý kiến. Tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn không muốn làm giáo viên trong trường không có quy tắc.

範例: No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it could be dangerous. Without rules, students might bring weapons like knives or other harmful objects, which would create a risky environment.

× There are a lot of rules in for student a school for example no running, no smoking, no argument, no fighting and I think that is pretty essential for school and it reduce the fight and encourage the students study.

✓ There are a lot of rules for students at school, for example, no running, no smoking, no arguing, no fighting, and I think that is pretty essential for school as it reduces fights and encourages students to study.

The phrase 'in for student a school' is incorrect preposition and word order usage. The correct preposition is 'for students at school'. Also, 'no argument' should be 'no arguing' to use the gerund form correctly. 'It reduce' should be 'it reduces' to agree with singular subject. 'Encourage the students study' should be 'encourages students to study' to use the correct verb form and infinitive.

× Yes I do. I think that student would benefit more from moral morals because rules.

✓ Yes, I do. I think that students would benefit more from morals because of rules.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Moral morals' is redundant; 'morals' alone is sufficient. Also, 'because rules' is incomplete; it should be 'because of rules' to correctly express the reason.

× Rules make student allow and student allow the rule because if you if they don't, they will get punished and maybe they can't study.

✓ Rules make students obey, and students allow the rules because if they don't, they will get punished and maybe they can't study.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Make student allow' is incorrect; 'make students obey' is more appropriate. 'Student allow the rule' should be 'students allow the rules'. The phrase 'if you if they don't' is confusing; it should be 'if they don't'.

× Yes I have. I have a really dedicated teacher and he's also teach me now his name is mine.

✓ Yes, I have. I have a really dedicated teacher and he is also teaching me now. His name is Mine.

'He's also teach me now' is incorrect; it should be 'he is also teaching me now' to use the present continuous tense. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× He really care about my classmate and especially me because I am a student that pretty bad in his subject is physics so he take a lot of time to kill me.

✓ He really cares about my classmates and especially me because I am a student who is pretty bad in his subject, which is physics, so he takes a lot of time to help me.

'He really care' should be 'he really cares' to agree with third person singular. 'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates'. 'A student that pretty bad' should be 'a student who is pretty bad'. 'He take' should be 'he takes'. 'To kill me' is incorrect and likely a mishearing; it should be 'to help me'.

× I think it's depend cause is also have a lot of uh hilarious rule in my school like no running and I think it's a pretty awkward UH.

✓ I think it depends because there are also a lot of hilarious rules in my school like no running, and I think it's pretty awkward.

'It's depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'Cause is also have' is incorrect; it should be 'because there are also'. 'Hilarious rule' should be plural 'hilarious rules'. 'A pretty awkward' should be 'pretty awkward' without 'a'.

× Instead the school should abandoned more rule about smoking.

✓ Instead, the school should abandon more rules about smoking.

'Should abandoned' is incorrect; modal verb 'should' is followed by base verb 'abandon'. 'More rule' should be plural 'more rules'.

× When I I will 8 eighth grader, his name is when he's really strict.

✓ When I was in eighth grade, his name is... and he was really strict.

'I will 8 eighth grader' is incorrect; it should be 'I was in eighth grade' to indicate past time. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'his name is when he's really strict' is confusing and needs clarification.

× He also always angry about the result, the test result of class and everybody in class hate her.

✓ He was also always angry about the test results of the class, and everybody in class hated him.

'He also always angry' should be 'He was also always angry' for correct tense and verb form. 'Everybody in class hate her' is incorrect pronoun and verb agreement; it should be 'everybody in class hated him'.

× In a rule free school, uh no I wouldn't because when either roof free school is quite dangerous cause uh the maybe it is student can bring some weapon to school like knight or even a gardens.

✓ In a rule-free school, no I wouldn't because a rule-free school is quite dangerous since students might bring weapons to school like knives or even garden tools.

'When either roof free school' is incorrect; it should be 'a rule-free school'. 'The maybe it is student can bring' is incorrect; it should be 'students might bring'. 'Knight' is likely a mishearing of 'knife'. 'Gardens' should be 'garden tools' or similar.

× So I think is really risky.

✓ So I think it is really risky.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' before 'is'.