规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer covers the main points but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "rules for students at school" twice. Also, use correct grammar such as "attending school every day" and "following instructions given by teachers." Try to combine ideas smoothly and limit to 3-4 sentences.

範例: Yes, my school has several rules, such as wearing the uniform every day, attending classes regularly, following teachers' instructions, and avoiding conflicts with other students. These rules help maintain discipline and a positive learning environment.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct sentence structure. Avoid filler words and incomplete phrases. Use linking words to explain your reasoning.

範例: I believe students can benefit from having more rules, but the rulemakers should be careful not to restrict their freedom or individuality. Effective rules should support students' growth without limiting their personal will.

建議: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating words like "very" twice. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

範例: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers throughout school, college, and university. They taught in a friendly manner, which helped me understand the topics better, and they were always available to help whenever I needed.

建議: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammar errors. Use correct words like "rules" instead of "roles" and "good manners" instead of "good manner." Also, clarify your opinion and use linking words to explain your reasoning.

範例: Students usually prefer fewer rules, and I feel the same. However, for my children, I would prefer more rules because they help build character, good manners, and proper behavior. Schools teach important lessons through these rules.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and sentence structure. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in school. He punished students who were absent or missed his lectures to ensure everyone followed the rules.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammar errors. Avoid filler words like "uh" and finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

範例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school, but it might be challenging because without rules, students may not follow my instructions easily. Therefore, maintaining some rules is important for effective teaching.

× They are such as wearing the uniform every day, following the instruction given by the teacher, attend the school every day and don't fight with other students.

✓ They are such as wearing the uniform every day, following the instructions given by the teacher, attending school every day, and not fighting with other students.

After 'such as', a list of activities should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. 'Attend' should be 'attending' and 'don't fight' should be 'not fighting' to match the gerund form used in the list.

× following the instruction given by the teacher

✓ following the instructions given by the teacher

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple directions or orders given by the teacher.

× These are the simple rules of the schools.

✓ These are the simple rules of the school.

The phrase 'the schools' is incorrect here because the context refers to one school. 'School' should be singular to match the context.

× I think it's it's student would be benefited by more rules, but there should the rulemaker should be careful about enforcing in rules that won't ****** away their freedoms and own will.

✓ I think students would benefit from more rules, but the rulemakers should be careful about enforcing rules that won't take away their freedoms and their own will.

The original sentence has redundancy ('it's it's'), incorrect modal verb usage ('would be benefited' should be 'would benefit'), and awkward phrasing ('enforcing in rules' is incorrect). The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× but there should the rulemaker should be careful about enforcing in rules that won't ****** away their freedoms and own will.

✓ but the rulemakers should be careful about enforcing rules that won't take away their freedoms and their own will.

The pronoun 'their' is used correctly here to refer to students, but 'own will' should be preceded by 'their' to clarify possession.

× Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher in my school, college and university and there are not one.

✓ Yes, I had really dedicated teachers in my school, college, and university; there was not just one.

The phrase 'there are not one' is incorrect. It should be 'there was not just one' to agree with the singular subject and past tense context. Also, 'teacher' should be plural to match the meaning.

× and they taught us very in a very friendly way so that we can understand the topic and we can reach them out anytime.

✓ and they taught us in a very friendly way so that we could understand the topic and reach out to them anytime.

The adverb 'very' was misplaced. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency, and 'reach them out' should be 'reach out to them' for correct phrasal verb usage.

× A student always like fewer roles at his school and I am no different.

✓ A student always likes fewer rules at his school, and I am no different.

'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'A student'. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules' as the context is about school regulations.

× But for my children, I would prefer morals because that will help them to build their character and good manner and good behavior because school is the place that teaches us through the rules.

✓ But for my children, I would prefer more rules because that will help them build their character, good manners, and good behavior, as school is the place that teaches us through rules.

'Morals' is incorrect here; it should be 'more rules'. Also, 'good manner' should be plural 'good manners'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× He was a very strict with the rules anyone get got absent from his class he give them punishment or if anyone cannot make that lecture.

✓ He was very strict with the rules; anyone who got absent from his class was given punishment, or if anyone could not attend that lecture.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'get got' is incorrect; it should be 'got'. 'He give' should be 'was given'. 'Cannot make' should be 'could not attend' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

✓ Would you like to work as a teacher at a rule-free school?

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate when referring to working at a specific institution like a school.

× Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule free school, but it can be difficult for me because as the school is rule free, the students will not likely to, uh follow the instruction I give, so I must have to.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school, but it could be difficult for me because, as the school is rule-free, the students will not likely follow the instructions I give, so I must.

'Can be' is changed to 'could be' to express possibility. 'Will not likely to' is incorrect; it should be 'will not likely follow'. 'Must have to' is redundant; 'must' alone is sufficient.