规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, explain the main rules clearly and logically.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must keep their nails short and wear clean uniforms every day. These rules help maintain discipline and a neat appearance.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I believe students benefit from having rules because rules help maintain discipline. Without rules, students might behave badly, but with rules, they learn how to act properly.

建議: Your answer has good content but grammar and clarity need improvement. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in high school. She was passionate about her subject and often stayed after class to help students understand the material. Her dedication inspired me to work harder.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to state your preference clearly and explain why, using specific reasons and examples.

範例: I prefer to have a few important rules at school because too many rules can be restrictive. The rules that help students improve are very useful for everyone.

建議: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear phrases. Try to describe the strict teacher clearly and explain how strict they were with examples.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school. If we did not do our homework, she would punish us, sometimes even physically. It was a difficult experience for me.

建議: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly and explain your reasons with proper sentence structure.

範例: I do not like teaching as a profession, but if I have the chance, I would teach students well, treating them equally regardless of their gender.

× As we have many rules in my school like we don't have find something to grow out long here.

✓ As we have many rules in my school, like we don't have to find something to grow out long here.

The original sentence has a plural issue with 'rules' and the phrase 'don't have find' is incorrect. It should be 'don't have to find' to express obligation or prohibition. The sentence also lacks clarity and proper structure.

× We always cut our nails, we have to pull his house just every day.

✓ We always cut our nails, and we have to clean our house every day.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used when referring to 'our house'. Also, 'pull his house' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'clean our house'. The sentence needs correction for pronoun agreement and verb usage.

× Our dress must be clean and. And.

✓ Our dress must be clean.

The sentence is incomplete and contains redundant conjunctions. It should be a complete sentence stating the rule clearly.

× I think it's because if there is no rules, strain might get the rough.

✓ I think it's because if there are no rules, students might get rough.

'Rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'strain' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse of 'students'. The sentence needs subject correction and verb agreement.

× If there was rule, people restraints will in the discipline and they know how to do that.

✓ If there were rules, people would be restrained in discipline and they would know how to behave.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' and the verb 'was' should be 'were' for subjunctive mood. 'Restraints' is incorrectly used; 'restrained' is the correct past participle. The sentence also needs modal verbs for conditional mood.

× Yes, I have been fortunate to have a really dedicated during my high school years.

✓ Yes, I have been fortunate to have a really dedicated teacher during my high school years.

The sentence is missing the noun 'teacher' after 'dedicated'. The tense is correct but the sentence is incomplete without the noun.

× She was always passionate about her subject and when the extra miles to inside every student understood the materials.

✓ She was always passionate about her subject and went the extra mile to ensure every student understood the material.

The phrase 'when the extra miles to inside' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'went the extra mile to ensure'. Also, 'materials' should be singular 'material' when referring to subject content.

× Often staying after a class to the offer Addison Health or communicate inspired me to work hard.

✓ She often stayed after class to offer additional help or communicate, which inspired me to work hard.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases like 'to the offer Addison Health'. It should be 'to offer additional help'. Also, the sentence needs a subject and proper structure.

× I prefer to have a few rules at my school because you still don't like too many rules.

✓ I prefer to have a few rules at my school because I don't like too many rules.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used instead of 'I'. The sentence also needs to maintain subject consistency.

× In my country, if there was a certain rules that helps student improvement, it was great for all of us.

✓ In my country, if there were certain rules that help student improvement, it would be great for all of us.

'Rules' is plural, so 'was' should be 'were'. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'rules'. The sentence is conditional and needs correct verb forms.

× Yes, in my high school there was 1 teacher.

✓ Yes, in my high school there was one teacher.

The number '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing.

× I was very strict, like if you don't do the this is your homework, they punish us and sometimes they beat us with the states.

✓ He was very strict, like if you don't do your homework, he punishes us and sometimes he beats us with sticks.

The subject is 'teacher' (he), so verbs should be in third person singular ('punishes', 'beats'). 'The states' is likely a mishearing of 'sticks'. Also, 'this is your homework' is incorrect; it should be 'your homework'.

× Yeah, it was very painful in that past time.

✓ Yeah, it was very painful at that time in the past.

The phrase 'in that past time' is awkward; 'at that time in the past' is more natural.

× I exactly don't like teaching professionals but if I got any chance I will do I will provide some good education to the students to as if they are girls.

✓ I don't exactly like teaching professionally, but if I get a chance, I will provide good education to the students as if they were my own children.

The sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and awkward phrasing. 'Exactly don't like' should be 'don't exactly like'. 'Got' should be 'get' for future possibility. 'To as if they are girls' is unclear; likely intended meaning is 'as if they were my own children' or similar.