规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but you can improve by using more precise vocabulary and correcting minor grammar errors. For example, instead of 'students are thought to avoid', say 'students are taught to avoid'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer flow better.

範例: There are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms at all times to promote equality and discipline. Additionally, they are taught to avoid using mobile phones during class hours to prevent distractions. Moreover, respecting teachers and fellow students is encouraged to maintain a positive learning environment.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'most of the time does not help'. Be more specific and concise.

範例: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because rules instill discipline, which supports both their academic and personal development. Furthermore, rules can prevent bullying, ensuring that students feel safe and comfortable at school.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'help to students' should be 'help students'. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I had a very dedicated government teacher in Senior High School. He often went above and beyond to help students understand the material. For example, he stayed after school to organize extra classes for those who struggled, which really helped me improve.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'reporting to school less' and 'build their academic and person'. Try to use clearer expressions and check your sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your points.

範例: I prefer having more rules at school because they encourage discipline among students. For instance, if students know that being late will result in punishment, they will make an effort to arrive on time. This helps improve their academic performance and personal responsibility.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and unclear ending ('it has really made me time'). Use correct plural forms ('homework' is uncountable) and complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in Senior High School who was particular about homework and punctuality. His strictness helped me develop good time management skills, and now I can complete my tasks on time.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains a spelling mistake ('row' instead of 'rule') and could be improved by using more formal vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'students' unnecessarily.

範例: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, students might behave irresponsibly, leading to chaos and lack of discipline.

× Some of these rules include students wearing uniform at all times to ensure equality and discipline.

✓ Some of these rules include students wearing uniforms at all times to ensure equality and discipline.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Also, students are thought to avoid the use of mobile phones during classes hours to prevent distraction and pupils are also advised to respect their tutors and their fellow colleagues which will ensure a positive learning environment.

✓ Also, students are taught to avoid the use of mobile phones during class hours to prevent distraction, and pupils are also advised to respect their tutors and their fellow colleagues, which will ensure a positive learning environment.

The word 'thought' is incorrect; it should be 'taught' (past tense of teach). Also, 'classes hours' should be 'class hours' (singular noun as an adjective). Commas are added for clarity. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Rules will also help students from bullying their fellow colleagues which most of the time does not help the students to have a comfortable stay in their school.

✓ Rules will also help prevent students from bullying their fellow colleagues, which most of the time does not help the students to have a comfortable stay in their school.

The phrase 'help students from bullying' is incorrect; it should be 'help prevent students from bullying'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× This teacher would go above and beyond to ensure that students understand the course very well.

✓ This teacher would go above and beyond to ensure that students understood the course very well.

Since the context is past (Senior High School), the verb 'understand' should be in past tense 'understood'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× At times after school he would stay behind to organize extra classes and help to students who had difficulties in parts of the subjects, and this really helped me to.

✓ At times after school, he would stay behind to organize extra classes and help students who had difficulties in parts of the subjects, and this really helped me too.

The phrase 'help to students' is incorrect; it should be 'help students'. Also, 'helped me to' should be 'helped me too'. Commas added for clarity. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× if a student knows that reporting to school less will attract A punishment, they would do all their activities in the morning very early in order to report on time to school and this will help build their academic and person.

✓ If a student knows that reporting to school late will attract a punishment, they would do all their activities in the morning very early in order to report on time to school, and this will help build their academic and personal life.

The phrase 'reporting to school less' is incorrect; it should be 'reporting to school late'. Also, 'A punishment' should be 'a punishment' (lowercase 'a'). 'Person' should be 'personal life' for clarity. This is incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).

× Yes, I used to have a very strict math tutor in Senior High School who was very particular about home works and also reporting very early to school.

✓ Yes, I used to have a very strict math tutor in Senior High School who was very particular about homework and also reporting very early to school.

The word 'home works' is incorrect; 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× This attitude of the teacher has really helped me because as at now I am able to do all my activities on time and it has really made me time.

✓ This attitude of the teacher has really helped me because as of now I am able to do all my activities on time and it has really saved me time.

The phrase 'as at now' is incorrect; it should be 'as of now'. Also, 'made me time' is unclear and should be 'saved me time'. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× No, I don't want to work in a row free school.

✓ No, I don't want to work in a rule-free school.

The phrase 'row free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).