规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且内容不够具体。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，避免语法错误和重复。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, teachers are not allowed to have intimate relationships with students, and students must complete all their assignments on time.

建議: 表达较为清晰，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式，并举例说明观点。

範例: No, I believe there should be a balance between rules and students' freedom. For instance, too many rules might limit students' ability to develop self-discipline.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点，注意时态和句子结构，提供具体细节。

範例: Yes, my master's supervisor is very dedicated and disciplined. Although she is over 70 years old, she still works more than 10 hours a day.

建議: 表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: As a Chinese student, I prefer fewer rules at school because strict rules can limit our personality and responsibility. For example, we have to wear the same uniform and have the same haircut.

建議: 回答较好，内容具体且连贯。建议进一步丰富细节，使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I had a very strict chemistry teacher who set high standards for us. Although his punishments made the class stressful, they motivated me to study harder.

建議: 回答表达不够准确，有拼写错误和语法问题。建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，提供更具体的理由。

範例: No, I wouldn't like to work at a school without rules because I believe rules are essential, especially for young students, to help them learn discipline.

× Yes, they I think there are some rules in my university.

✓ Yes, I think there are some rules in my university.

句子中多余的代词“they”导致主语混乱，应删除以保持主语一致。

× for the college students for example, the teacher shouldn't have a intimate relationship with the students

✓ For the college students, for example, the teacher shouldn't have an intimate relationship with the students.

“a intimate”中的冠词使用错误，因“intimate”以元音音素开头，应使用不定冠词“an”。

× and for students they should finish all their.

✓ and for students, they should finish all their work.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清，应补充宾语“work”。

× Too many restrictions may be have a bad effect on students ability of self-discipline and their self restriction.

✓ Too many restrictions may have a bad effect on students' ability of self-discipline and their self-restriction.

“may be have”结构错误，应去掉“be”使情态动词用法正确。

× I had the supervisor of my master program is very delicate and very self-discipline.

✓ The supervisor of my master's program is very dedicated and very self-disciplined.

“delicate”用词错误，应为“dedicated”（敬业的）；“self-discipline”应为形容词“self-disciplined”。

× She has over her 70s, but she still works over 10 hours per day and she.

✓ She is over 70 years old, but she still works over 10 hours per day.

“has over her 70s”表达错误，应改为“is over 70 years old”；句子末尾“and she”不完整，应删除。

× I prefer to have less rules at school because I think St. rules limit us to develop our personality and responsibility.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think strict rules limit us in developing our personality and responsibility.

“less rules”应为“fewer rules”，因为“rules”是可数名词；“St.”应为“strict”。

× For example, at school we are required to have the same haircut and dress the same uniform.

✓ For example, at school we are required to have the same haircut and wear the same uniform.

“dress the same uniform”用法错误，应使用动词“wear”表示穿着。

× I remember my chemistry teacher was very demanding and strict because he set very high standard for all of us.

✓ I remember my chemistry teacher was very demanding and strict because he set very high standards for all of us.

“standard”应为复数“standards”，与“very high”搭配。

× We didn't meet his expectations.

✓ We didn't meet his expectations.

句子正确，无需修改。

× He would often punish us, which made the whole class very stressful but also motivated me to work harder.

✓ He would often punish us, which made the whole class very stressful but also motivated me to work harder.

句子正确，无需修改。

× No, I wouldn't like to work at such a school because I think Rose is very essential for students, especially those students who at a very young age.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work at such a school because I think rules are very essential for students, especially those students who are at a very young age.

“Rose”应为“rules”；“who at a very young age”缺少动词，应加“are”。