规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子较长且有重复，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且更自然地表达观点。

範例: There are very few rules at my school because it is a Chinese-foreign cooperative school. The main rule is that students must maintain a GPA above 65, or they risk being expelled.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的语法结构，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: No, I don't think more rules would help. At university, we are adults responsible for our own lives, so too many restrictions can limit our freedom and creativity.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和连贯性，建议补充具体例子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers. For example, some professors encourage us to explore interesting and fun aspects of the subject, which makes learning enjoyable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并且表达更自然。

範例: I prefer fewer rules because I know what I want and like to plan my life independently. This helps me achieve my goals more efficiently.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且更清晰地描述事件。

範例: Yes, this semester I had a very strict professor. For example, he got angry when I arrived five minutes late at 8 a.m., which I found quite strict.

建議: 回答表达混乱，有重复和语法错误，建议理清思路，避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: I like rule-free schools because respecting students is important. However, I don't want to be a teacher; I prefer to work in companies and be involved in society, as teaching feels limited to school life.

× No, there are hardly any rules in our school because I study at a Chinese and foreign cooperative school and the only restriction is that you your GPA need to above 65 otherwise you will be out of school.

✓ No, there are hardly any rules in our school because I study at a Chinese and foreign cooperative school and the only restriction is that your GPA needs to be above 65, otherwise you will be out of school.

这里的主语是单数名词GPA，谓语动词需要用第三人称单数形式needs，并且动词短语需要完整，缺少了be动词。

× No, I don't think so, because in the university we are adults, we are responsible for our life, we know what we have to do and I think too many restrictions will restrict our mind and action and I think it will reduce our creative.

✓ No, I don't think so, because at university we are adults, we are responsible for our lives, we know what we have to do and I think too many restrictions will restrict our minds and actions and I think it will reduce our creativity.

life应为复数形式lives，mind和action也应为复数形式minds和actions，creative是形容词，需改为名词creativity。

× Yes, we have many dedicated teachers. I met lots of professors and I think they have many academic goals and in the class they want us to explore the interest and the fun things of the subject like.

✓ Yes, we have many dedicated teachers. I have met lots of professors and I think they have many academic goals and in class they want us to explore the interests and the fun things of the subject.

动词时态应与上下文一致，使用现在完成时have met；介词in the class应为in class；interest应为复数interests；句尾like多余，应删除。

× No, I don't because I know exactly what I have to do, what I want in my life and I like plan my life on my own because I think it's this is the most efficient way to achieve my goal.

✓ No, I don't because I know exactly what I have to do, what I want in my life and I like to plan my life on my own because I think this is the most efficient way to achieve my goal.

动词like后应接不定式to plan；句中多余的it’s应删除。

× Yes, this semester I met a very strict professor and an like when I arrived late, 5 minutes in 8:00 in the morning and he gets angry and I think that's very impressive. I think it's too early and I just arrived 5 minutes late.

✓ Yes, this semester I met a very strict professor and when I arrived late, 5 minutes after 8:00 in the morning, he got angry and I think that's very impressive. I think it's too early and I just arrived 5 minutes late.

and an like多余，应删除；时间表达应为5 minutes after 8:00；动词时态应一致，he gets angry改为he got angry。

× I like rule free schools because I think humanity is very important. You need to respect the students. But I don't want to be teacher. I want I want to work in companies and teacher. I want to get involved into society and teacher is just like a school life.

✓ I like rule-free schools because I think humanity is very important. You need to respect the students. But I don't want to be a teacher. I want to work in companies and not be a teacher. I want to get involved in society and teaching is just like school life.

teacher前缺少冠词a；重复的I want应简化；and teacher表达不清，应改为and not be a teacher；get involved后应接介词in；teacher is just like a school life表达不自然，改为teaching is just like school life更合适。