规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Gaplaringizni yanada aniq va tabiiy qilish uchun, gaplarni to'g'ri tuzing va ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching. Masalan, "and and" kabi takrorlanishlarni olib tashlang va gaplarni yaxshiroq bog'lang.

範例: Yes, of course. There are several rules at school, such as coming to lessons and school on time. Moreover, students must wear uniforms and focus on learning.

建議: Javobingizda gap tuzilishi va so'z tanlashda xatolar bor. "They must responsible their uniform" kabi iboralar noto'g'ri. Gaplaringizni to'g'ri va aniq qilish uchun, grammatikani yaxshilang va fikrlaringizni to'liq ifoda eting.

範例: Yes, of course. First, they learn responsibility by taking care of their uniforms and arriving on time. In addition, this helps them become more confident.

建議: Javobingizda ko'p "uh" so'zlari va takrorlanishlar bor, bu gapirishni tabiiy emas qiladi. Gaplaringizni qisqa va aniq qilib, keraksiz so'zlardan qoching. Shuningdek, gaplarni to'liq yakunlang.

範例: Yes, of course. She was my English teacher and very responsible. She always tried to organize creative lessons to help us learn better.

建議: Javobingizda fikr aniq ifoda etilmagan va gaplar chalkash. Gaplaringizni yaxshilash uchun, fikringizni aniq va mantiqiy tarzda ifoda eting, keraksiz so'zlardan qoching va gaplarni to'liq yakunlang.

範例: I think there should be a balance. The number of rules depends on the school and the students' attitude.

建議: Javobingizda jinslar aralashib ketgan va gaplar to'liq emas. Grammatikani yaxshilang, jinslarni to'g'ri ishlating va gaplaringizni aniq va to'liq ifoda eting.

範例: Yes, I had a strict math teacher. He always demanded all homework to be done on time. If we didn't, he punished us and reminded us that we must work hard.

建議: Javobingizda ko'p "uh" so'zlari va gaplar to'liq emas. Gaplaringizni qisqa, aniq va tabiiy qilib, fikrlaringizni to'liq ifoda eting.

範例: Yes, of course. Working in a rule-free school would allow me to teach more freely. I would feel comfortable and confident in such an environment.

× Yes, of course. There are several rules at school, such as. Coming to lesson and school on time and moreover, they must wear uniforms and and they should learn.

✓ Yes, of course. There are several rules at school, such as coming to lessons and school on time. Moreover, they must wear uniforms and they should study.

The original sentence has sentence fragments and incorrect punctuation. 'Such as.' should not be followed by a period but by examples. 'Coming to lesson and school' is awkward; it should be 'coming to lessons and school'. The phrase 'and and they should learn' is redundant and unclear; 'they should study' is more appropriate. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments and ensure proper punctuation and clear phrasing.

× Yes, of course the first they learn responsibility and they must responsible their uniform and arriving at on time. In addition, they will be more confident and.

✓ Yes, of course. First, they learn responsibility, and they must be responsible for their uniform and arriving on time. In addition, they will be more confident.

The phrase 'they must responsible their uniform' is incorrect; 'responsible' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be' and the preposition 'for'. Also, 'arriving at on time' is incorrect; it should be 'arriving on time'. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper punctuation. Suggestions: use 'be responsible for' and correct prepositions.

× Uh, yes, of course. Uh, she was my English teacher, uh, she was very responsible for, uh, her work and always tried to, uh, organize, organize, uh, creative, uh, lesson and always.

✓ Uh, yes, of course. She was my English teacher. She was very responsible for her work and always tried to organize creative lessons.

The original sentence has repeated words and incomplete phrases. 'Creative, uh, lesson' should be plural 'creative lessons' to match the context. Also, unnecessary fillers and repetitions should be removed for clarity. Suggestions: avoid repetition and use plural form for countable nouns when appropriate.

× I think there should be a limit. Uh, there should not, uh, more or fewer And uh, sometimes it depends on the school and people's attention and the year before.

✓ I think there should be a limit. There should not be too many or too few rules. Sometimes, it depends on the school, people's attention, and the previous year.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'There should not, uh, more or fewer' lacks a verb and object. 'More or fewer' what? The correction adds 'be too many or too few rules' for clarity. Also, 'the year before' is better expressed as 'the previous year'. Suggestions: complete sentences with necessary verbs and clarify references.

× Uh, yes, he was our math teacher. She always demanded uh, all homeworks when we didn't. Also, uh, he punished uh, us and always, umm, uh, told us I, we must, uh, work.

✓ Uh, yes, he was our math teacher. He always demanded all homework when we didn't do it. Also, he punished us and always told us we must work.

The pronouns 'he' and 'she' are inconsistent referring to the same teacher. 'Homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable. The phrase 'when we didn't' is incomplete; it should be 'when we didn't do it'. The phrase 'told us I, we must' is incorrect; it should be 'told us we must'. Suggestions: maintain consistent pronouns, use uncountable nouns correctly, and complete sentences.

× Uh, yes, of course. Uh, it helps me to work freely and, uh, when I work this kind of school, I feel myself comfortable and uh, it makes me feel confident. So I.

✓ Uh, yes, of course. It helps me to work freely, and when I work at this kind of school, I feel comfortable and confident.

The phrase 'when I work this kind of school' is missing the preposition 'at'. 'I feel myself comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel comfortable'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'So I.' which is incomplete. Suggestions: use correct prepositions, avoid reflexive pronouns when unnecessary, and complete sentences.