规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。特に"no, they are because"の部分は意味が通じません。回答は直接的に質問に答え、具体的な例を簡潔に述べるべきです。

範例: No, there are no strict rules at my university. However, when I was in high school, there were many rules, such as girls not being allowed to cut their skirts.

建議: 文が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確に述べ、論理的に繋げるために接続詞を使うことが必要です。

範例: I don't think more rules would benefit students because they might feel stressed and restricted. Therefore, having fewer rules can make school life more enjoyable.

建議: 文法的に誤りがあり、内容も不明瞭です。過去形を使い、教師の特徴を具体的に説明することが望ましいです。

範例: Yes, I had a teacher who was very dedicated to Japanese traditional literature. He always encouraged us to read classic books.

建議: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させる必要があります。

範例: I prefer fewer rules at school because students can learn to decide what is right or wrong by themselves. Also, it allows for a freer and more comfortable school life.

建議: 文法と語順に誤りがあります。具体的なエピソードを簡潔に述べ、文を正しく構成しましょう。

範例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher when I was in junior high school. He always checked students' uniforms before they entered the classroom.

建議: 文が断片的で意味が不明瞭です。理由を明確にし、文を完結させることが必要です。

範例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it benefits both students and teachers. Teachers don't have to scold students, and students can enjoy more freedom.

× Umm, actually no, they are because I'm a university student.

✓ Umm, actually no, there aren't because I'm a university student.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used here to refer to 'rules'. The correct pronoun should be 'there' to indicate the existence of rules. 'There are' is used to state the presence of something, not 'they are'.

× For example, girls cannot cut their skirt.

✓ For example, girls cannot cut their skirts.

The noun 'skirt' should be plural 'skirts' because it refers to the skirts of multiple girls. When referring to possessions of multiple people, the noun should be plural.

× Umm, I don't think so, because if they. Have more rules. Students feel tight or feel stressed about it freely. School life is better.

✓ Umm, I don't think so, because if they have more rules, students feel tight or stressed about it. School life is better without that.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection between clauses. The sentence should be combined properly with commas and conjunctions to make it coherent and grammatically correct.

× Yes I do I I have a teacher who dedicated to Japanese tradition traditional books.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a teacher who is dedicated to Japanese traditional books.

The pronoun and verb form are incorrect. 'Who dedicated' should be 'who is dedicated' to correctly describe the teacher's dedication. Also, 'traditional' is repeated unnecessarily.

× They always read them.

✓ He always reads them.

The pronoun 'They' is used incorrectly if referring to a single teacher. It should be 'He' or 'She' depending on the teacher's gender. Also, the verb should agree in third person singular form 'reads'.

× That's because many student have to think what is wrong and right in on their mind.

✓ That's because many students have to think about what is wrong and right in their minds.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many'. Also, 'in on their mind' is incorrect; it should be 'in their minds' or 'about in their minds'.

× Also freely life is.

✓ Also, life is freer.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Freely life is' is incorrect word order. The correct form is 'life is freer' to express the intended meaning.

× I I had a teacher strict teacher when I was in junior high school student.

✓ I had a strict teacher when I was a junior high school student.

The phrase 'teacher strict teacher' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'junior high school student' needs an article 'a' before it.

× They always check their cost students costume before they enter the classroom.

✓ He always checked students' costumes before they entered the classroom.

'They' is incorrectly used if referring to a single teacher; it should be 'He' or 'She'. Also, 'cost students costume' is incorrect; it should be 'students' costumes' with possessive apostrophe and plural noun. Verb tense adjusted to past to match 'had'.

× For teachers, they don't have to scold to students.

✓ For teachers, they don't have to scold students.

The verb 'scold' does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'scold students' without 'to'.