规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by using correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear the school uniform and shoes. Additionally, we are expected to maintain discipline and are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.

建議: Your answer conveys the idea but has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help us learn discipline. Therefore, following rules can guide us to become successful in the future.

建議: Your answer has good content but some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I have a really dedicated teacher. For example, my maths teacher never misses any chapter or problem. He explains everything thoroughly and provides useful information for the subject.

建議: Your answer expresses your opinion but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear sentences. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons.

範例: As a student, I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules make me feel like I am in jail. Therefore, having fewer rules gives students more freedom.

建議: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct words and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to make your answer more logical.

範例: Yes, I have had a strict teacher. For example, if I grow long hair, the teacher does not allow me to attend class until I get a haircut. I think this rule helps maintain discipline.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct grammar. Also, give a clear reason for your answer using linking words like 'because'.

範例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I am not interested in that profession. Also, I think I am too lazy to teach students.

× Yes, there are many kind of rules which was which should follow in my school.

✓ Yes, there are many kinds of rules which we should follow in my school.

The phrase 'many kind of rules' is incorrect because 'many' requires a plural noun, so 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds'. Also, 'which was which should follow' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'which we should follow' to make sense.

× Some of them are everyone should wear school dress and shoes when they attend to school and everyone should be in disciplined manner and there are many rules that we should not bring mobile phones to our school.

✓ Some of them are: everyone should wear school dress and shoes when they attend school, everyone should behave in a disciplined manner, and there are many rules that we should not bring mobile phones to our school.

The phrase 'attend to school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'attend school'. Also, 'be in disciplined manner' is incorrect; it should be 'behave in a disciplined manner' to express proper conduct.

× Yes, I think student would be benefit for from more roles because they learn to how how to become a successful person by following all these rules.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because they learn how to become successful persons by following all these rules.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'. 'Benefit for from' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'benefit from'. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules' as per context.

× Yes, I think student would be benefit for from more roles because they learn to how how to become a successful person by following all these rules.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because they learn how to become successful persons by following all these rules.

The phrase 'benefit for from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'benefit from'. Also, 'learn to how how' is redundant; it should be 'learn how'.

× Yes, I do have a really dedicated teacher. For example my maths are is very dedicated.

✓ Yes, I do have a really dedicated teacher. For example, my maths teacher is very dedicated.

'Maths are' is incorrect; it should be 'maths teacher' as the subject is a person, singular. Also, 'is' is the correct verb for singular subject.

× He do not miss any chapter or any problem from the chapter.

✓ He does not miss any chapter or any problem from the chapter.

For third person singular subjects like 'he', the auxiliary verb should be 'does' not 'do'. Hence, 'He does not miss' is correct.

× He provides us valid information which was useful in the subject.

✓ He provides us with valid information which is useful in the subject.

The verb 'provides' requires the preposition 'with' after it. Also, 'which was useful' should be 'which is useful' to maintain present tense consistency.

× As being a student, everyone will prefer that there should few, few rules for students.

✓ As a student, everyone will prefer that there should be few rules for students.

The phrase 'there should few, few rules' is incorrect. It should be 'there should be few rules' to correctly express the quantity.

× I think if there are many rules, I think I'm in not a school.

✓ I think if there are many rules, I feel like I am not in a school.

The phrase 'I'm in not a school' is incorrect in word order. The correct structure is 'I am not in a school' or 'I feel like I am not in a school'.

× I feel like I'm at jail.

✓ I feel like I'm in jail.

The correct preposition with 'jail' is 'in', not 'at'. So, 'in jail' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I do have a real estate teachers in my school.

✓ Yes, I do have a really strict teacher in my school.

'Real estate teachers' is incorrect and irrelevant. The intended phrase is likely 'really strict teacher' (singular) to match 'a' and the context.

× For example, if I grow some long hair, they don't like to encourage me and they will not allow me to sit in the class.

✓ For example, if I grow long hair, they don't like to encourage me and will not allow me to sit in the class.

The phrase 'some long hair' is awkward; 'long hair' is sufficient. Also, 'they don't like to encourage me' is unclear; better to say 'they do not approve' or 'they do not encourage'. However, this is more style than grammar.

× They will allow me to sit in the class after the haircut.

✓ They will allow me to sit in the class after I get a haircut.

The phrase 'after the haircut' is vague; it is clearer to say 'after I get a haircut' to specify the action.

× No, I I don't don't wanna work as a school teacher in Rule free school because I'm not interested in those profession because I'm I'm too lazy person.

✓ No, I don't want to work as a school teacher in a rule-free school because I'm not interested in that profession and I am a lazy person.

Repeated words like 'I I' and 'don't don't' are errors. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Rule free school' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free school'. 'Those profession' is incorrect; 'that profession' is correct as 'profession' is singular.

× I think I may not be teach the students.

✓ I think I may not be able to teach the students.

The phrase 'may not be teach' is incorrect; it should be 'may not be able to teach' to express ability or possibility.