规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa natural janai desu. Repetition ga arimasu, soshite bun no structure ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, shougakusei no toki no koto wo setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'When I was in high school, there were many rules, but we could choose the color of our underwear.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: When I was in high school, there were many rules, but we could choose the color of our underwear, which made us feel more comfortable and free.

建議: Answer wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, eigo no bunpou to vocabulary no shiyou wo kaizen suru hitsuyou ga arimasu. 'Uniform law' no imi wo motto meikaku ni shite, riyuu wo setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think uniform rules help students because everyone looks the same, so it is easier to make friends.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: I think having uniform rules benefits students because when everyone dresses the same, it reduces social pressure and helps students make friends more easily.

建議: Answer wa imi ga wakari nikui desu. Taisetsu na pointo wo meikaku ni shite, bun no structure wo kaizen shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in elementary school who taught me to always greet teachers politely.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in elementary school who always told us to greet every teacher politely, which taught me respect and good manners.

建議: Answer wa hontou ni wakari nikui desu. Koko de wa, 'more or fewer rules' ni taishite seikaku ni kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I prefer fewer rules because too many rules make students feel stressed.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel stressed and limit their freedom.

建議: Answer wa sukoshi wakariyasui desu ga, bunpou to vocabulary wo motto seikaku ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I had a very strict elementary school teacher who always told us to try to be number one in any competition.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict elementary school teacher who always encouraged us to be number one in every competition to motivate us.

建議: Answer wa imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'Rule-free school' ni tsuite no rikai wo meikaku ni shite, riyuu wo setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'No, I don't want to work in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to manage students.' to iu fuu ni.

範例: No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it would be hard to manage students and maintain order.

× I'm I'm university student so I don't have any school school, but when my high school student I have many I have there are many school like we we can choose the color of underwear.

✓ I'm a university student so I don't have a school, but when I was a high school student, there were many schools where we could choose the color of underwear.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect sentence structure. 'I'm I'm' is repeated, 'school school' is repeated, and the sentence lacks proper connectors and verb forms. Also, 'when my high school student' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a high school student'. The verb 'have' is misused; it should be 'there were many schools'. The sentence needs proper articles and verb tenses to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do umm there especially the uniform law is the benefit for students because the student everybody looks like the same, so it is good things they can make friend anyone.

✓ Yes, I do. Especially the uniform law benefits students because all the students look the same, so it is a good thing; they can make friends with anyone.

The sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'the student everybody' is incorrect; it should be 'all the students'. 'looks like the same' should be 'look the same' to agree with plural subject. 'good things' should be singular 'a good thing'. Also, 'make friend anyone' should be 'make friends with anyone'. Proper plural forms and prepositions are needed.

× Yes, yes, I have my when my elementary school student, the six years the teacher was really dedicated. He was saying always you should greet tea any teacher every time.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was an elementary school student for six years, the teacher was really dedicated. He always said you should greet any teacher every time.

The sentence has tense and word order issues. 'my when my elementary school student' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was an elementary school student'. 'the six years' should be 'for six years'. 'He was saying always' should be 'He always said'. 'greet tea any teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'greet any teacher'.

× I pray for if you are rude at school because you bring her men. There are many school in Japanese in Japanese, so it's difficult. It's a little bit tight for student. So I don't I don't need moral at school. I think I don't.

✓ I pray that if you are rude at school, you bring harm. There are many schools in Japan, so it's difficult. It's a little bit strict for students. So I don't need more rules at school. I think I don't.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and word choice errors. 'bring her men' is likely 'bring harm'. 'many school' should be 'many schools'. 'in Japanese in Japanese' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'in Japan'. 'tight' should be 'strict'. 'moral' should be 'more rules'. The sentence needs correction in pronouns and vocabulary.

× Yes, I have the really strong teacher who, who? Elementary school teacher, uh, he was very strict and he's always said you should get #1 any competition.

✓ Yes, I had a really strict elementary school teacher. He was very strict and he always said you should get number one in any competition.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and word order issues. 'I have the really strong teacher' should be 'I had a really strict teacher'. 'he's always said' should be 'he always said'. 'get #1 any competition' should be 'get number one in any competition'.

× No, I don't want work at school. Don't work as a teacher in your free Rd. free school because it's hard. Maybe the school will happen breathing everyday so I don't wanna work there.

✓ No, I don't want to work at school. I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it's hard. Maybe the school will have problems every day, so I don't want to work there.

The sentence has modal verb and infinitive form errors. 'don't want work' should be 'don't want to work'. 'your free Rd. free school' is unclear and should be 'a rule-free school'. 'will happen breathing everyday' is incorrect; it should be 'will have problems every day'. The sentence needs correct modal verb usage and infinitive forms.