规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be specific about the rules.

範例: Yes, my school in Malaysia has several rules. For instance, we must wear uniforms that cover our ankles, and there are strict punctuality and behaviour rules. If students do not obey these rules, they face consequences.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer clearer and avoid repetition. Be more precise in explaining why more rules are beneficial.

範例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because they are afraid of breaking them and facing consequences. Therefore, they are more likely to follow the rules set by schools or governments.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Avoid filler words like 'umm'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of how the teacher helped you.

範例: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher who inspired me a lot. For example, I used to be late often, but she gave me advice to wake up early, which helped me manage my time better and become more efficient.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, correct minor grammatical errors for better fluency.

範例: I prefer having more rules at school because punctuality rules ensure students arrive on time and don't miss important lessons. Moreover, strict uniform rules help younger students develop discipline.

建議: Avoid repetition of 'for example' and filler words like 'umm'. Use correct plural forms and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, we have many strict teachers. For instance, if a student arrives late, they face serious consequences. Once, I was five minutes late and had to skip class and write a long essay as punishment.

建議: Clarify your ideas and correct minor errors. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases like 'row 3 school'.

範例: I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because it would be difficult to manage. I believe that rules help students listen better and allow teachers to be more organised.

× Yes, my school in Malaysia has several kind of rules.

✓ Yes, my school in Malaysia has several kinds of rules.

The noun 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when preceded by 'several' because 'several' indicates more than one. Also, 'kinds' should be followed by 'of' to correctly link to 'rules'.

× If anyone is not this is not obeying the.

✓ If anyone is not obeying these rules.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. It lacks a proper verb phrase and object. The corrected sentence completes the thought clearly and grammatically.

× they tend to afraid of disobeying the rules

✓ they tend to be afraid of disobeying the rules

The verb 'tend' should be followed by 'to' plus the base form of the verb. 'Afraid' is an adjective and requires the verb 'be' to form 'to be afraid'.

× She tend to give me lots of advices which I tend to wake up early and to become more efficient.

✓ She tends to give me lots of advice which helps me to wake up early and become more efficient.

'She' requires the third person singular verb form 'tends'. 'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by clarifying the relationship between the advice and the actions.

× Yes, we have lots of strict teacher.

✓ Yes, we have lots of strict teachers.

'Lots of' is used with plural countable nouns, so 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers'.

× if anyone is not arriving school on time

✓ if anyone is not arriving at school on time

The correct preposition to use with 'arrive' when referring to a place is 'at'. 'Arriving school' is incorrect without the preposition.

× we tend to get umm a hard consequences from them.

✓ we tend to get hard consequences from them.

'Consequences' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed. 'A' is used with singular countable nouns only.

× I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a row 3 school because it would be hard to manage the school and it is very unstructured environment.

✓ I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it would be hard to manage the school and it is a very unstructured environment.

The phrase 'row 3 school' seems to be a typo and should be 'rule-free school'. Also, 'very unstructured environment' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very' because 'environment' is a singular countable noun.