规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and some grammatical errors which affect clarity. Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar, for example, 'girls are not allowed to have long nails' instead of 'girls do not having large nails'. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details without repetition.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, girls are not allowed to have long nails or wear excessive makeup. Additionally, all students must wear a proper uniform and clean shoes.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I think there should be limited rules because too many rules can frustrate students.'

範例: I believe students would benefit more from having fewer rules because too many rules can be frustrating and stressful. However, some important rules are necessary to maintain discipline.

建議: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical errors and hesitations. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. My English teacher is passionate and professional. She teaches very well, and thanks to her, many students, including me, have achieved high scores in English.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage.

範例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because too many rules can demotivate students and make them feel frustrated. Therefore, I think a less strict environment is better for learning.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I have had a very strict teacher. She gave us a lot of homework and expected us to complete it on time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and organize your ideas logically. Use correct grammar and avoid contradictions.

範例: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because teaching is a difficult job. It requires good communication skills, and I don't think I am good at explaining things to students.

× girls do not uh, having uh, large nails or they can wear a pony or there should be a proper uniform

✓ girls are not allowed to have large nails, or they can wear a ponytail, and there should be a proper uniform

The phrase 'do not having' is incorrect because after 'do not' the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. The correct structure is 'do not have'. Also, 'wear a pony' is unclear; it should be 'wear a ponytail'. The sentence also needed clearer conjunctions for better flow.

× I think there should be a limited rules, not a lots of rules

✓ I think there should be limited rules, not a lot of rules

'Rules' is plural, so 'a limited rules' is incorrect; 'limited' should not be preceded by 'a' when referring to plural nouns. Also, 'a lots of rules' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a lot of rules'.

× to get, uh, to having lots of rules and, umm, strictness

✓ to have lots of rules and strictness

After 'to' (infinitive marker), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to having' should be 'to have'.

× there should be a, a proper rules

✓ there should be proper rules

'Rules' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The article 'a' is used with singular countable nouns only.

× she is so delegated and passionate about their work

✓ she is so dedicated and passionate about her work

'Delegated' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'dedicated'. Also, 'their' is a plural possessive pronoun, but the subject is singular 'she', so 'her' should be used.

× she umm, she's so professional and she's teaches very well to their students

✓ she is so professional and she teaches very well her students

In the present simple tense, the verb for third person singular does not take 's' when used with 'she is' (she's). 'She's teaches' is incorrect; it should be 'she teaches'. Also, 'to their students' is incorrect; 'her students' is appropriate.

× we got hi higher schools in English

✓ we got high scores in English

The phrase 'hi higher schools' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'high scores' or 'high grades' in English.

× I mostly prefer, I thought athletic roles in schools

✓ I mostly prefer, I think athletic rules in schools

'Roles' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'rules'. Also, 'thought' should be 'think' to match the present tense.

× it can uh, demotivate the students or make sometimes so frustrating for the students to deal

✓ it can demotivate the students or sometimes make it so frustrating for the students to deal with

The sentence structure is awkward. 'Make sometimes so frustrating' should be 'sometimes make it so frustrating'. Also, 'to deal' should be 'to deal with'.

× Lots of role, uh, and strictness

✓ lots of rules and strictness

'Role' is singular; the correct plural form is 'rules' in this context.

× she giving lots of homework and I'm

✓ she gives lots of homework and I am

The verb 'giving' is incorrect here; the correct present simple form for third person singular is 'gives'. Also, 'I'm' is incomplete and should be completed or removed.

× I preferably not like to become a teacher because I'm not a teaching

✓ I would prefer not to become a teacher because I am not a teacher

'Preferably not like' is incorrect modal verb usage. The correct expression is 'I would prefer not to'. Also, 'I'm not a teaching' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not a teacher'.

× I like to teach students

✓ I like teaching students

Both 'like to teach' and 'like teaching' are correct, but 'like teaching' is more natural in this context.

× I think it's a very hard job to teach someone and to explain something to students

✓ I think teaching and explaining things to students is a very hard job

The original sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved for clarity and conciseness by restructuring.

× So I am not a good speaker as well as not explain things to someone

✓ So I am not a good speaker and I am not good at explaining things to others

The phrase 'not explain things to someone' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'not good at explaining things to others'. Also, 'someone' is vague; 'others' is more appropriate here.