规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school that students must follow. For example, students are required to wear a uniform consisting of a white T-shirt and black trousers. Additionally, attendance at all lessons is mandatory.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. Provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I don't think adding more rules would benefit students because they need enough freedom to express their thoughts and opinions comfortably.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use more precise vocabulary and provide specific examples of the teacher's dedication.

範例: Yes, definitely. My history teacher, who taught me from 6th to 9th grade, was very dedicated. She was passionate about the subject and always prepared interesting lessons that helped us understand history better.

建議: Correct vocabulary errors ('rows' should be 'rules') and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I am satisfied with the current number of rules at my school because they are few and simple, which makes them easy to follow.

建議: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher who often shouted during lessons because students struggled to understand her explanations, which made the class quite stressful.

建議: Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'stop born'. Use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with linking words for coherence.

範例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher because I find it challenging to manage teenagers and children, especially when they lose focus and do not pay attention to important information.

× Oh yes, there is some several rules at my school that students have to follow.

✓ Oh yes, there are several rules at my school that students have to follow.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'some several' is incorrect; 'several' alone is sufficient to indicate more than one.

× Uh, also they have to attend lessons every.

✓ Uh, also they have to attend lessons every day.

The sentence is incomplete; 'every' needs a noun to complete the phrase. Adding 'day' completes the meaning.

× because students have to feel themselves free enough or to share their thoughts.

✓ because students have to feel free enough to share their thoughts.

The reflexive pronoun 'themselves' is unnecessary here. The correct expression is 'feel free' without 'themselves'.

× I'm pleased with the number of rows that I have at this moment at my school because we don't have a lot of rules right now, just we have some, several not complicated rules that I can easily follow.

✓ I'm pleased with the number of rules that I have at this moment at my school because we don't have a lot of rules right now, just some several not complicated rules that I can easily follow.

The word 'rows' is incorrect; it should be 'rules' to match the context. 'Some, several' is redundant; 'several' alone is sufficient.

× Oh yes, I have experience having a very strict math teacher.

✓ Oh yes, I have had experience with a very strict math teacher.

The present perfect 'have had' is appropriate to indicate past experience continuing to the present. Also, 'experience having' is awkward; 'experience with' is better.

× because they sometimes stop born and do not listen for the main information

✓ because they sometimes get bored and do not listen to the main information

The phrase 'stop born' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'get bored'. Also, the verb 'listen' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'for'.