规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear school uniforms, arrive on time for classes, and follow the school's code of conduct.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议练习使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: From my point of view, I disagree with having more rules because they restrict students' freedom, which may limit their creativity.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整句子描述老师的特点，并避免口语化的填充词。

範例: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers during my 12 years of study. One of them was my high school chemistry teacher who was very responsible and always prepared for class.

建議: 回答中词汇使用不准确（roles应为rules），表达不够自然，建议注意词汇的正确使用并简化表达。

範例: I prefer fewer rules at school because it encourages students to develop self-discipline rather than just following external regulations.

建議: 回答语法和表达不准确，建议使用完整句子描述老师的严格行为，并避免模糊表达。

範例: Yes, my high school chemistry teacher was very strict. She did not allow students to speak loudly in class without permission.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议练习使用连贯的句子表达自己的观点和理由。

範例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. I am not very patient or caring, and I think teaching is a very challenging profession that I am not interested in.

× In China, students are restricted by various rules, such as they must wear school uniforms or they can't get in school and they must arrive class in time.

✓ In China, students are restricted by various rules, such as they must wear school uniforms or they can't get into school and they must arrive in class on time.

句中“get in school”应为“get into school”，表示进入学校，介词使用错误（属于介词使用错误，ID 11），另外“arrive class in time”应为“arrive in class on time”，缺少介词“in”和副词“on time”表示准时。

× OK so from my point of view I disagree with this because they are restrict their defined and you don't have freedom to do whatever you want and this may limit creativity and.

✓ OK, so from my point of view, I disagree with this because they are restricted and you don't have the freedom to do whatever you want, and this may limit creativity.

句中“they are restrict their defined”语法错误，应为“they are restricted”，过去分词作被动语态，且“defined”无意义，删除。缺少冠词“the”在“freedom”前。

× Yes, within my 12 years studying, there are so many dedicated teacher and they're very responsible.

✓ Yes, within my 12 years of studying, there are so many dedicated teachers and they're very responsible.

“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，因为前面用了“so many”，表示复数。

× One of them was my high school, uh, chemistry teacher. She is old, but she arrived.

✓ One of them was my high school, uh, chemistry teacher. She is old, but she arrived on time.

“arrived”后缺少状语，补充“on time”表示准时。

× I prefer to have fewer roles at school since this can help students form a disciplinary idea from their own heart instead of by others or outer space rules.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school since this can help students form a disciplinary idea from their own heart instead of by others or external rules.

“roles”应为“rules”，意思是规则而非角色。

× Yes, as I mentioned before there was 1 teacher who was my high school chemistry teacher. She didn't allow everyone to speak loud in her class without mention and she ruled.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, there was one teacher who was my high school chemistry teacher. She didn't allow everyone to speak loudly in her class without permission and she ruled.

“speak loud”应为副词形式“speak loudly”，修饰动词。 “without mention”应为“without permission”，表达允许的意思。

× Of course not. First, I'm not a person who is patient and caring. I think I might be mad at student and secondly is a very tough profession for me and I don't like this career.

✓ Of course not. First, I'm not a person who is patient and caring. I think I might get mad at students and secondly, it is a very tough profession for me and I don't like this career.

“mad at student”应为“mad at students”，复数形式。句中缺少主语“it”在“secondly is a very tough profession”前。