规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ содержит много слов-паразитов и нечеткую структуру. Следует избегать повторений и использовать более точные формулировки. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must be polite, avoid running in the corridors, and are not allowed to bring forbidden items. These rules help maintain a safe and respectful environment.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и разговорные выражения, которые неуместны в формальном контексте. Следует использовать более формальный стиль и улучшить грамматику.

範例: I don't agree that more rules would benefit students. If the rules are too strict, students might lose interest in studying because they would feel restricted, like being in a prison. Therefore, a balanced number of rules is better.

建議: Ответ достаточно информативен, но содержит небольшие грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует улучшить согласование времен и использовать более точные выражения.

範例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher at my university in Dubai. She was a finance professor who understood her subject deeply and taught us effective learning methods. Working with her was a great experience.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и немного неструктурированный. Следует избегать повторений и завершать мысли более чётко. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности.

範例: I prefer fewer rules at school because having more freedom allows me to express myself better. This freedom can help students reach their full potential and enjoy studying more.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и разговорные выражения. Следует улучшить грамматику и структуру предложения, а также избегать неформальных фраз.

範例: Yes, I had a strict biology teacher at school. Although she was demanding, her strictness motivated me to achieve excellent academic results because I was careful not to argue with her.

建議: Ответ содержит разговорные выражения и повторения. Следует использовать более формальный стиль и структурировать ответ более логично.

範例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a school without rules. Teaching is demanding and requires a lot of energy. Moreover, managing students without any rules would be very challenging.

× but yes there is definitely rules in our school.

✓ but yes there are definitely rules in our school.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement error involving singular and plural forms.

× when 1 is too strict with the student, student will lack the interest in studying

✓ when one is too strict with the students, students will lack interest in studying

The pronoun '1' should be 'one' and the noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement. Also, 'lack the interest' should be 'lack interest' for natural phrasing.

× I think it should not be too more rules.

✓ I think there should not be too many rules.

The phrase 'too more rules' is incorrect. 'Too many' is the correct quantifier for countable plural nouns like 'rules'.

× She was one of the teachers that fully understand their principles

✓ She was one of the teachers that fully understood their principles

The verb 'understand' should be in the past tense 'understood' to agree with the past tense context 'was'.

× She was one of the teachers that fully understand their principles

✓ She was one of the teachers who fully understood her principles

Since 'she' is singular, the pronoun referring back should be singular 'her' instead of 'their'.

× I would be really delighted to study there because I think when they give us more freedom, we would be more expressive and we would have great.

✓ I would be really delighted to study there because I think when they give us more freedom, we would be more expressive and we would do great.

The phrase 'we would have great' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'we would do great' to express performing well.

× I had a great results in my studies and my academic results with this teacher

✓ I had great results in my studies and my academic results with this teacher

'Results' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed to correctly match the plural noun.

× I was really afraid to be argued to to argue with her.

✓ I was really afraid to argue with her.

The phrase 'afraid to be argued to to argue' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'afraid to argue'.