规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct plural forms and verb agreements. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words.

範例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we must wear uniforms and arrive on time. Additionally, smartphones are usually not allowed to ensure a better learning environment.

建議: Work on grammar, especially plural forms and article usage. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Absolutely, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because it helps cultivate their discipline and organization. As a result, they can focus better on their subjects and learn more effectively at school.

建議: Focus on correct word choice and grammar, such as 'dedicated' and 'patient'. Clarify unclear phrases like 'difficult compact'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, my physical education teacher in high school was very dedicated. She stayed after school to help us solve difficult problems. Her patient teaching helped me improve my learning significantly.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. Provide more specific explanations or examples to support your preference.

範例: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop discipline and stay organized. Moreover, clear rules create a better atmosphere for studying, which enables students to learn more effectively.

建議: Correct grammar and word choice, such as 'strict' instead of 'stressed', and clarify unclear phrases like 'make me expect passion of math'. Use linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, my math teacher in high school was very strict. She always made sure we submitted our homework on time, which helped me develop a strong passion for math.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary, such as 'rule-free' instead of 'roof free'. Avoid unclear phrases and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it would be challenging to develop discipline and organization among students. I believe having rules is essential for effective teaching and learning.

× Yes, there are many rules for student at Ms. school.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at Ms. school.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple individuals subject to the rules.

× Besides, the smartphone usually don't allow use in school to keep a better learning.

✓ Besides, smartphones usually aren't allowed to be used in school to maintain better learning.

'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'usually'. Also, 'don't allow use' is incorrect; the passive form 'aren't allowed to be used' is appropriate here.

× Absolutely, I think student would benefit more from more rules because it can cultivate the their discipline and organized.

✓ Absolutely, I think students would benefit more from more rules because they can cultivate their discipline and organization.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject. 'The their' is redundant; 'their' alone is correct. 'Organized' should be the noun 'organization' to match 'discipline'.

× Yes, my physique teacher in my high school who is really dedicate she stay after school and help us solve the difficult compact.

✓ Yes, my physical education teacher in my high school, who is really dedicated, stays after school and helps us solve difficult problems.

'Physique teacher' should be 'physical education teacher'. 'Dedicate' should be 'dedicated' (adjective). 'Stay' and 'help' need third person singular forms 'stays' and 'helps'. 'Compact' is incorrect; 'problems' fits better.

× Her patient teaching makes me learning better from from her.

✓ Her patient teaching helps me learn better from her.

'Patient' should be 'patient' (adjective) which is correct, but 'makes me learning' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me learn'. Also, 'from from' is a repetition error.

× I prefer to have more rules at school. It can help student develop their discipline and organized for the clean rules.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school. They can help students develop their discipline and organization through clear rules.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'their'. 'Organized' should be the noun 'organization'. 'Clean rules' is better expressed as 'clear rules'.

× Yes, my math teacher in my high school who was really stressed, she always make sure the homework hang in on time and make me expect passion of math.

✓ Yes, my math teacher in high school was really strict; she always made sure the homework was handed in on time and made me develop a passion for math.

'Stressed' should be 'strict' to describe a strict teacher. 'Make' should be past tense 'made' to agree with 'was'. 'Hang in' should be 'handed in'. 'Expect passion of math' is incorrect; 'develop a passion for math' is correct.

× No, I don't like what? As a teacher in a roof free school, it's a challenge for me to develop, organize and discipline for the students.

✓ No, I don't like that. As a teacher in a rule-free school, it would be a challenge for me to develop, organize, and discipline the students.

'What?' is unclear and should be 'that'. 'Roof free' is a typo for 'rule-free'. The modal verb 'would' is appropriate to express hypothetical challenge. 'Discipline for the students' should be 'discipline the students'.

× I cannot adapt on time and give me some negative experiences.

✓ I cannot adapt in time and it would give me some negative experiences.

'Adapt on time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'adapt in time'. Also, 'give me some negative experiences' needs a subject; 'it would give me' is correct.