规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and clearer. Avoid grammatical errors like "in the high school I was" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the rules.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my high school. For instance, students are not allowed to leave the campus without their parents' permission, and the use of mobile phones is restricted during class hours to minimize distractions.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts with linking words and avoid filler words like "umm". Be more concise and specific about why rules are needed.

範例: I believe students can benefit from more rules, especially regarding technology use. For example, since teenagers spend a lot of time on their phones, having rules can help protect them from potential dangers online while still encouraging responsible decision-making.

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and contains repetition. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, I have had a really dedicated teacher. For example, my high school art teacher was very kind and always willing to help students. I am grateful for her support, and I think there should be more teachers like her.

建議: Your answer has several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words and speak clearly. Also, explain your opinion with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer having more rules at school because teachers nowadays face many challenges with students who do not follow the current rules. Therefore, stricter regulations could help improve discipline and the learning environment.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I had a very strict mathematics teacher when I was 12 years old. Although he was strict, we learned a lot because his discipline helped us focus and understand the subject better.

建議: Your answer contains many hesitations and some grammatical mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas clearly with linking words. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I think working in a rule-free school would be nice, but only if the students are well-behaved. Without rules, it could be difficult to manage the class if students do not follow social norms.

× For example in the high school I was you can't go out without your parents permission and the mobile phones are restricted too.

✓ For example, in high school, you can't go out without your parents' permission and mobile phones are restricted too.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I was' which is unnecessary and confusing. Also, 'the high school' should be 'high school' without 'the' as it refers to school in general. 'Parents permission' needs an apostrophe to show possession: 'parents' permission'. Removing 'I was' and correcting articles and possessive form improves clarity and grammar.

× I think kids and teenagers need some rules.

✓ I think kids and teenagers need to have some rules.

While the original sentence is understandable, adding 'to have' after 'need' clarifies the necessity of rules. 'Need' as a modal verb is often followed by the base form of another verb to express necessity.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have had.

The question is about experience up to now, so the present perfect tense 'have had' is appropriate rather than simple past 'had'. 'Yes, I had' is incomplete and ungrammatical in this context.

× I am. I am so grateful for this.

✓ I am so grateful for this.

The repetition 'I am. I am' is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence should be concise and grammatically correct as 'I am so grateful for this.'

× For example, my art teacher during high school, it was such a kind person.

✓ For example, my art teacher during high school was such a kind person.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it' to refer to the teacher, which is a person and should be referred to by 'he' or 'she' or omitted. Removing 'it' makes the sentence correct.

× I think that it should be more teachers like this.

✓ I think that there should be more teachers like this.

The phrase 'it should be more teachers' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'there should be more teachers' to indicate existence or quantity.

× Nowadays teacher has have have a lot of problems with the kids as they are not responding to the Today rules.

✓ Nowadays, teachers have a lot of problems with the kids as they are not responding to the current rules.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'teacher has have have' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers have' to agree in number and tense. 'Today rules' is incorrect; 'current rules' or 'today's rules' is appropriate. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× Nowadays teacher has have have a lot of problems with the kids as they are not responding to the Today rules.

✓ Nowadays, teachers have a lot of problems with the kids as they are not responding to today's rules.

The phrase 'the Today rules' is incorrect because 'Today' should be possessive 'today's' to modify 'rules'. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match the verb 'have'.

× Yes. I can remember when I was 12 years old, my mathematics teacher was super strict.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was 12 years old, my mathematics teacher was super strict.

The phrase 'I can remember' is acceptable but 'I remember' is more natural and commonly used when recalling past events. Both are correct, but 'I remember' fits better in spoken English.

× But it's incredible how we learn with him.

✓ But it's incredible how we learned with him.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so the verb should be in past tense 'learned' instead of present 'learn'.

× If the you have, uh, well behaved child, because if the child doesn't follow, uh, the, the rules, like the established social rules, it would be a bit complicated.

✓ If you have a well-behaved child, because if the child doesn't follow the established social rules, it would be a bit complicated.

The phrase 'If the you have' is incorrect; it should be 'If you have'. Also, 'well behaved' should be hyphenated as 'well-behaved'. Removing unnecessary commas and repeated words improves clarity.

× But yes, if the Childs are good, yes, completely.

✓ But yes, if the children are good, yes, completely.

'Childs' is incorrect plural form; the correct plural of 'child' is 'children'.