聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and sentence endings (e.g., “gives” not “give”).

範例: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends makes me feel happy and connected because I can share my ideas and emotions. For example, when I talk about my day or problems, I feel supported and understood.

建議: Organize the response: state the general rule, then give specific contrasting examples using linking words (e.g., “whereas”, “but”). Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases like “a child freedom.”

範例: It depends. With acquaintances I usually exchange casual messages about plans or news, whereas with close friends I share personal thoughts, daily experiences, and even secrets because I trust them.

建議: Finish your thought and give a clear preference with reasons. Use linking words (e.g., “however”, “for example”) and correct plural/verb agreement (e.g., “team members”). Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

範例: It depends on the situation. For group projects I prefer group chats because we can coordinate and share ideas quickly; however, for personal matters I prefer one-on-one chats for privacy and deeper conversation.

建議: Use correct verbs and nouns (e.g., “prefer”, “emotion”, “eye contact”) and avoid awkward phrases like “in the reality.” Give concise reasons and one short example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can show emotions through intonation and body language and maintain eye contact. For example, difficult or sensitive topics are easier to resolve in person.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer and explain reasons with linking words. Avoid confusing phrases; use simpler, clearer sentences to state why disagreements can be useful and give a specific example.

範例: Yes, I do. I think arguments can be useful because they reveal different perspectives and help find better solutions. For example, when my friends and I disagree about scientific issues, we discuss evidence and often learn something new.

× Absolutely yes.

✓ Absolutely.

The word 'absolutely' alone is a complete affirmative response; using 'absolutely yes' is redundant and unidiomatic. Use 'absolutely' or 'yes' but not both together.

× Chatting with friends can make me feel happy and connected with other people.

✓ Chatting with friends makes me feel happy and connected to other people.

Use consistent tense and correct preposition 'connected to'. Also 'can make me feel' is wordier; simple present 'makes me feel' fits habitual action.

× When I chat with them, it can feel the connection with them and I can share my ideas, my emotion as well.

✓ When I chat with them, I feel a connection and can share my ideas and my emotions.

Remove unnecessary modal 'can' for habitual action, use singular 'a connection', and plural 'emotions'. Improve parallel structure: 'share my ideas and my emotions'.

× So chatting with other people give me a lot of sense of happiness and.

✓ So chatting with other people gives me a strong sense of happiness.

Subject 'chatting' is singular gerund, so verb should be 'gives'. Remove awkward 'a lot of sense of' and finish sentence; use 'strong sense of happiness'.

× Well it depends, for the normal friend that I'm not close to much I will chat with them some normal messages.

✓ Well, it depends. For acquaintances I'm not very close to, I exchange ordinary messages with them.

Use present simple for habitual action, clarify 'acquaintances' instead of 'normal friend', and correct word order. 'Exchange ordinary messages' is more natural than 'chat with them some normal messages'.

× But with someone I'm very close to a child freedom, share my ideas, my daily life and even say about the secret things that I've never say out loud.

✓ But with someone I'm very close to, I feel free to share my ideas, my daily life, and even secrets I've never said out loud.

Insert missing verb 'feel', correct phrase 'feel free', use past participle 'said' for 'have never said', and add commas. 'Say about' is incorrect; use 'share' or 'say' with direct object.

× So it's quite depend.

✓ So it depends quite a lot.

Use correct verb 'depends' with subject 'it' and natural phrasing 'quite a lot'.

× Well, it's kinda generally depends on the situation.

✓ Well, it generally depends on the situation.

Remove redundant 'kinda' and fix verb agreement: 'it depends' not 'it's depends'.

× If I have a project or some presentation and yeah, a group chatting is better choice.

✓ If I have a project or a presentation, group chatting is the better choice.

Use article 'a' with 'presentation', change 'a group chatting' to 'group chatting' or 'chatting in a group', and include 'the' for 'better choice'.

× Uh, I can communicate, uh, my idea for everything.

✓ I can communicate my ideas about everything.

Pluralize 'ideas' to match 'everything' and remove extraneous filler. Use 'about' instead of 'for'.

× Every members on my team understand and got it.

✓ Every member on my team understands and gets it.

Use singular 'member' with 'every', and verbs should be present simple for habitual ability: 'understands and gets it'.

× But when I have to.

✓ But when I have to, I prefer one-on-one conversations.

Original fragment lacks completion. Provide a full sentence that matches context: when required, prefer one-on-one conversations.

× Well, from my perspective, I totally refer face to face communication.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I totally prefer face-to-face communication.

Use verb 'prefer' instead of 'refer', and hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective before 'communication'.

× I can show my motion, my intonation and I can see and eye contact with them using body language.

✓ I can show my emotion and intonation, and I can make eye contact and use body language.

Correct 'motion' to 'emotion', reorder for natural phrasing, use 'make eye contact' and separate actions clearly.

× That's some kind of very useful for communication in the reality.

✓ That's very useful for real-life communication.

Replace awkward 'some kind of very useful' with 'very useful' and use 'real-life communication' instead of 'communication in the reality'.

× 100% yes.

✓ Absolutely; yes, I do.

'100% yes' is informal and inappropriate in this context. Use 'Absolutely' or 'Yes, I do'.

× One way they cuts with each other about your personal, uh, idea about something you can have the other size other perspective of each other.

✓ Sometimes friends argue about personal ideas, and this lets you see the other person's perspective.

Original is fragmented and confusing. Rephrase clearly: 'argue about personal ideas' and 'see the other person's perspective'.

× Would it mind you can get the proper solution to solve with that problem?

✓ Would it bother you? You can often find a better solution to the problem.

Split into two clear sentences: a question 'Would it bother you?' and a statement explaining that arguments can help find better solutions. Fix verb forms and prepositions.

× For example, if I argue with my friends about, uh, Vietnamese and Chinese science, I can understand.

✓ For example, if I argue with my friends about Vietnamese and Chinese philosophies, I can understand their viewpoints better.

Complete the idea: 'I can understand their viewpoints better.' Clarify 'science' to a more likely topic 'philosophies' or specify if meant 'scientific approaches'. Ensure sentence has an object and result.