聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تنظيم إجابتك بجملة افتتاحية واضحة ثم توضيح السبب بتفصيل بسيط. تجنّب التردد والكلمات المحشوّة (مثل "uh" و"um") واختر مفردات أبسط وأكثر دقّة للتعبير عن الفكرة (مثلاً "it makes me feel happy and prevents boredom"). احرص ألا تتجاوز 3-4 جمل لتكون طبيعية ومباشرة.

範例: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends makes me feel happy and prevents me from getting bored. It also helps me relax after a long day at school and share funny stories or experiences.

建議: ابدأ بجملة موضوع واضحة ثم اعطِ تفاصيل محددة ومترابطة باستخدام روابط مثل "because" أو "for example". تجنّب العبارات المكررة والكلمات غير الواضحة (مثل "I need for the more time" و"Hello"). استخدم أمثلة محددة عن المواضيع (الامتحانات، المستقبل، الأنشطة).

範例: We mostly talk about school, because this is our final year and we worry about exams and university plans. For example, we discuss study schedules, university applications, and what we will do after graduation.

建議: احرص على تقديم جواب مباشر ثم تبريره بجملة أو جملتين مع ربط واضح (مثل "if... then..." أو "because"). صغ الجمل بشكل أنيق وتجنّب أخطاء تركيبية بسيطة. قل لماذا تفضّل الحديث مع صديق واحد (مثلاً الخصوصية أو العمق).

範例: It depends on the people. If I like the group and feel comfortable, I enjoy group chats, but usually I prefer talking with one friend because conversations are more private and deeper.

建議: ابدأ بعبارة واضحة تؤكد تفضيلك ثم اشرح الأسباب بشكل منظم وبدون تكرار. استخدم مفردات مناسبة مثل "more natural" و"clearer communication" واذكر مثالاً سريعاً عن الشعور أو موقف يوضّح وجهة نظرك.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and we can understand each other better. For example, seeing someone's expressions makes conversations more enjoyable and clearer than chatting online.

建議: قدّم إجابة مباشرة ثم فسّر موقفك بعبارات واضحة مثل "we rarely argue, but sometimes we disagree and discuss calmly". تجنّب التردّد والكلمات المكرّرة وامدّد الجملة بدليل أو مثال مختصر عن موضوع خلاف عادي.

範例: Not really — we rarely argue because we respect each other. Sometimes we have disagreements about small things, like which activity to choose, but we usually discuss them calmly and find a compromise.

× Yes, of course, chatting with the friends has kept us and a a God feeling and enjoyable things.

✓ Yes, of course. Chatting with friends makes us feel good and is enjoyable.

The original sentence uses incorrect and duplicated words ('a a God feeling'), wrong verb form 'has kept us', and extra article 'the friends'. Use present simple 'makes' for general truth, remove unnecessary articles, and use 'feel good' and 'enjoyable' correctly. Suggestion: use concise clauses and correct adjective/adverb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Umm, and it's like, uh, give me uh, something that's, that's, uh, make the feel, uh, make my feelings not bored and yeah, like that.

✓ Umm, and it's like it gives me something that makes me feel not bored.

The sentence mixes forms and lacks subject-verb agreement. Use present simple 'gives' and 'makes' for habitual effects, and use the pronoun 'me' after 'makes'. Avoid repeated filler words. Suggestion: simplify to 'it gives me something that makes me not bored.' Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Actually, because we are seniors and this is the last year of school, we are chatting about the school I need for the more time.

✓ Actually, because we are seniors and this is our last year of school, we talk about school more often.

Use present simple 'talk' for habitual actions, not continuous 'are chatting' with unnecessary phrase 'I need for the more time.' Replace 'the school I need for the more time' with 'school more often' and use possessive 'our last year'. Suggestion: use present simple for regular activities and clear frequency expressions. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Also we are chatting about what we are doing.

✓ We also talk about what we are doing.

For habitual conversations, use simple present 'talk' instead of present continuous 'are chatting'. Present continuous implies happening right now. Suggestion: use 'talk' to describe regular topics. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Actually it's based on the group that I will chat with efforts.

✓ It depends on the group I am chatting with.

Original has incorrect structure 'based on' and odd word 'efforts' and future 'will' is unnecessary. Use 'depends on' and present continuous or simple 'I chat with' to express preference. Suggestion: 'It depends on the group I'm with.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× If it's a group that I love to chat with them, it's fine but if not, no, I feel that I prefer to chat with 1 friend.

✓ If it's a group I enjoy chatting with, it's fine; if not, I prefer to chat with one friend.

Don't use both 'that' and 'them' together; redundant pronoun. Use 'enjoy chatting with' and spell out numbers in words ('one'). Suggestion: remove redundant pronouns and use consistent verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because it's better and we can like chatting good.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's better and we can chat well.

Use 'chat' (verb) not 'chatting' after 'can', and use adverb 'well' instead of adjective 'good'. 'Face to face' is correct as fixed expression. Suggestion: use modal + base verb and proper adverb form. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Like good than chatting with social media.

✓ It's better than chatting via social media.

Use comparative 'better' not 'good', and use preposition 'via' or 'on' for social media. Suggestion: use 'better than' structure for comparisons. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× And uh, like when I chatting face to face, I feel that I'm so, uh, enjoyable to see my friend.

✓ And when I chat face to face, I feel very happy to see my friend.

Use 'chat' (base verb) after subject not 'I chatting'. 'Enjoyable' is an adjective describing something that gives enjoyment; to express personal feeling use 'happy' or 'enjoyed'. Also use 'friends' plural if referring generally. Suggestion: 'I feel very happy to see my friends.' Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Actually, no, because we are friends, so no need for argue.

✓ Actually, no, because we are friends, so there is no need to argue.

Use 'there is no need to' and infinitive 'to argue'. 'No need for argue' is ungrammatical; use noun 'an argument' or infinitive. Suggestion: say 'there's no need to argue.' Grammar problem type ID: 14

× But uh, there's something, uh, it's supposed to argue with it.

✓ But sometimes there are things we are supposed to argue about.

Original is unclear and has wrong pronoun 'it'. Use 'things' plural with 'argue about' and present simple for general statement. Suggestion: 'Sometimes we need to argue about certain things.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× It's OK, but it's not an I will argue.

✓ It's OK, but I won't argue.

'Not an I will argue' is ungrammatical. Use contraction 'I won't' or 'I will not' to indicate future refusal. Suggestion: 'I won't argue; I'll just discuss.' Grammar problem type ID: 12

× It's an argue like, uh, or just discuss for the thing.

✓ It's more like an argument or just a discussion about the issue.

Use noun 'argument' not verb 'argue' here, and say 'discussion about the issue' rather than 'discuss for the thing'. Suggestion: choose correct noun forms and preposition 'about'. Grammar problem type ID: 12