聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid phrases like "according to me" (say "I think"), and limit to two supporting reasons with linking words. Reduce redundancy and filler words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it’s more convenient than phone calls and gives me time to think before replying. For example, when I’m busy at work I can respond later, and when I want to explain something I can write it clearly.

建議: Organize the answer: give a topic sentence, then two specific examples using linking words. Remove fillers (uh, you know) and correct grammar (present continuous vs simple). Be specific about topics and platforms.

範例: I usually chat about work and leisure. For example, with colleagues on WhatsApp we discuss upcoming projects and deadlines, while with close friends we share memes and plan social activities.

建議: Be clearer and more fluent: state your preference directly, use linking words to explain reasons, and avoid repetition. Use correct phrasing ("one person at a time", "clearer") and give a brief example.

範例: I prefer chatting with one person at a time because it’s clearer and more private. For instance, when discussing personal matters I message a single friend so there’s less confusion and the conversation feels more secure.

建議: Make the structure tighter: give a clear conditional statement, use linking words to contrast ("however", "but"), and finish with a concrete example. Avoid trailing off and be grammatically precise.

範例: It depends on the situation: for formal matters like job interviews I prefer face-to-face meetings, but for routine work communication I use social media. For example, I attend interviews in person but discuss daily tasks with colleagues via Slack.

建議: Answer directly and concisely: state your general tendency, then give a specific conditional reason and a short example. Avoid vague phrases and grammar mistakes ("to who argue" should be "who argues").

範例: I usually avoid arguments, but I will argue if it’s about something important, like ethics or fairness. For example, I once had to debate a friend about workplace honesty because it affected others, so I spoke up.

× I like chatting with friends because according to me, chatting is more convenient than talking on call and we have some time to think about what to say and how to say.

✓ I like chatting with friends because, in my opinion, chatting is more convenient than talking on the phone and we have time to think about what to say and how to say it.

Used 'according to me' which is not natural English; use 'in my opinion'. 'talking on call' is incorrect; use 'talking on the phone' or 'making phone calls'. Added 'it' after 'how to say' for completeness. Also removed unnecessary 'some' before 'time'. Suggestion: use natural prepositional phrases and complete clause objects.

× So we are keep uh, chatting about the work.

✓ So we keep chatting about the work.

Incorrect verb construction 'are keep chatting' mixes progressive auxiliary with base verb; correct progressive is 'are keeping' or simple present 'keep chatting'. Here simple present 'keep chatting' fits better. Suggestion: choose either 'keep' + -ing or 'are' + present participle, not both.

× If you talk about my friends, then we just love to send memes over there, uh, to each other and.

✓ If you talk about my friends, we just love to send memes to each other.

Sentence ends with 'and' creating a fragment; 'over there' is unnecessary. Removed filler and completed sentence. Suggestion: avoid sentence-ending conjunctions and redundant locatives.

× Well, I prefer to chat only one member at a time because according to me, uh, it is more like clarity when we chat with one friend and we are, we, we have, we are aware that we are chatting to home and there is end to end encryption in these kind of chat.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one person at a time because, in my opinion, it is clearer when we chat with one friend. We also know our chats are end-to-end encrypted.

'Only one member' is unnatural; use 'only one person'. 'It is more like clarity' is ungrammatical — use 'it is clearer'. 'Chatting to home' is unclear and incorrect; removed. 'These kind of chat' should be 'these kinds of chats' or 'this kind of chat' — corrected to 'our chats are end-to-end encrypted.' Suggestion: simplify sentences and use correct quantifiers and noun forms ('person', 'chats').

× So if there is some kind of interview, then I will prefer to have conversation face to face.

✓ If there is an interview, I prefer to have the conversation face to face.

'Some kind of interview' is wordy; 'an interview' is better. 'I will prefer' is awkward in this context; use simple present 'I prefer' for general preference. Added definite article 'the' before 'conversation'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences and proper articles.

× And if there is any kind of public meeting and I can say like in my office, if there is anything about the work, then I'll love to.

✓ If there is a public meeting or, for example, a discussion at my office about work, I would prefer not to use social media.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear ('I'll love to' is incomplete). Rewrote to convey intent: prefer face-to-face for work meetings. Suggestion: avoid filler phrases like 'I can say like' and complete the clause with a clear verb and object.

× Not actually, but I'm not that kind of person, you know, to who argue in each and every situation.

✓ Not really. I'm not the kind of person who argues in every situation.

Use 'not really' instead of 'not actually' for conversational denial. 'to who argue' is incorrect; use 'who argues' with 'the kind of person' but since 'person' is singular use 'who argues' or recast to 'who argues in every situation.' Also removed 'each and' redundancy. Suggestion: use correct relative pronoun and verb agreement.

× So yeah, that kind of conversation, I have to argue sometime.

✓ So yes, in situations like that I have to argue sometimes.

'Sometime' vs 'sometimes': 'sometime' means at some_unspecified_time, while 'sometimes' means occasionally. Reordered phrase for natural flow. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency and place adverb correctly.