聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, and provide one brief specific example using linking words (e.g., 'for example' or 'so'). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me express myself and relax. For example, I felt upset about work yesterday, so I called a close friend and told her what happened, and afterwards I felt much better.

建議: Be specific about topics and use clearer vocabulary and sentence structure. Give one or two concrete topics and a short reason or example. Use linking words for coherence and avoid filler words.

範例: I usually talk about family life and work. For example, I often discuss parenting tips with friends because we share experiences about raising children and solving daily problems.

建議: Give a direct clear preference first, then briefly explain why with one specific reason. Use correct verbs and reduce repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it lets us focus and have deeper conversations. In a group, topics often change quickly and it is harder to discuss personal issues in detail.

建議: Start with a clear conditional statement and correct verb forms. Give one specific situation for each mode of communication. Remove hesitations and be concise.

範例: It depends on the situation. If I'm free, I prefer face-to-face for a more personal conversation, but when I'm busy at home looking after my children I use apps like WeChat or FaceTime to stay in touch while I work.

建議: Answer directly and explain the positive purpose of disagreements with clear language and grammar. Provide a brief example of a constructive argument and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, we do sometimes argue, but usually in a constructive way because we want to improve. For instance, a friend once disagreed with my parenting approach and after discussing it calmly I adopted one of her suggestions, which helped me a lot.

× Chatting with friends give me a wonderful time about how I can express myself to my friend.

✓ Chatting with friends gives me a wonderful opportunity to express myself to my friends.

Subject 'Chatting' is a singular gerund subject and requires singular verb 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). 'A wonderful time about how' is unnatural; use 'a wonderful opportunity to' and pluralize 'friend' to 'friends' to match 'friends' earlier. Suggestion: Use singular verb with gerund subjects and choose clearer nouns (opportunity) and consistent plurality.

× For example, yesterday I feel upset at work, so I call my friend and tell her on about that.

✓ For example, yesterday I felt upset at work, so I called my friend and told her about it.

The sentence refers to a past event ('yesterday') so past tense verbs are required: 'feel' -> 'felt', 'call' -> 'called', 'tell' -> 'told'. Remove the extraneous preposition 'on' and use 'about it' for clarity. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past time markers.

× After that I feel much better.

✓ After that I felt much better.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense 'felt' should be used instead of present 'feel'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time frame indicated.

× Well, I normally talk about all of the topic with my friend, family, working children and parenting.

✓ Well, I normally talk about all of the topics related to friends, family, work, children, and parenting.

'All of the topic' is incorrect; use 'all of the topics' or 'all the topics'. Also the list items were unclear: 'working children' is incorrect; replace with 'work' and separate items clearly. Use parallel nouns in a list. Suggestion: Use plural 'topics' and ensure list items are parallel and accurate.

× A big master with me now, uh, for example, I always share with my friend about how to, umm, parent, be a good parenting.

✓ For example, I always share with my friends about how to be good parents.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear ('A big master with me now' makes no sense). 'Be a good parenting' is incorrect; 'parenting' is a noun, but the intended meaning is 'be good parents' or 'practice good parenting'. Use plural 'friends' to match context and simplify the structure. Suggestion: Remove irrelevant fragments and use clear subject-verb structure: 'I always share with my friends how to be good parents.'

× I refer speak with a friend rather than a read group of people because we can focus on the story and we can have a deep talk about the topic.

✓ I prefer speaking with a friend rather than a large group of people because we can focus on the story and have a deeper discussion about the topic.

Multiple issues: 'I refer speak' should be 'I prefer speaking' (word choice and form). 'Read group' is incorrect—likely 'large group'. 'Have a deep talk' is awkward; use 'have a deeper discussion'. Pronouns/phrasing adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct verbs ('prefer'), gerund form after preference ('prefer speaking'), and appropriate adjectives ('large', 'deeper').

× When there are too many people we can discuss this closely.

✓ When there are too many people, we cannot discuss it closely.

Logical meaning: too many people prevents close discussion, so use negative modal. Also include comma after the subordinate clause. 'Discuss this closely' is awkward; 'discuss it closely' or 'have a close discussion' is better. Suggestion: Ensure conjunctions and logical connectors reflect intended meaning; add punctuation for clarity.

× Well, it's depend on the situation, uh, if I was too busy, I refer using social media such as umm Viber, WeChat or FaceTime to talk with my friend while I can doing my household chores or something like looking after my children, umm.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. If I am too busy, I prefer using social media such as Viber, WeChat or FaceTime to talk with my friends while I do my household chores or look after my children.

Use present tense 'depends' for a general statement. 'If I was too busy' should be 'if I am too busy' for hypothetical present/future situations. 'I refer' -> 'I prefer' and use gerund 'using'. 'I can doing' is incorrect; use 'I do' or 'while doing'. Ensure plural 'friends'. Suggestion: Use correct present tense and verb forms after modal constructions; keep consistent person and number.

× Yes, of course it is very common. We often ask you, but to make us better, not in a negative way, you know, argue to tell your friend that your opinion, what do you think or and vice versa, so we can help each other improve ourself.

✓ Yes, of course. It is very common. We often argue, but to help each other improve, not in a negative way. Arguing lets you tell your friend your opinion and ask 'what do you think', and vice versa, so we can help each other improve ourselves.

Sentence had many problems: 'We often ask you' is wrong; 'argue' should be a noun or present verb 'We often argue'. Clarify purpose 'to help each other improve'. 'Argue to tell your friend that your opinion' -> 'arguing lets you tell your friend your opinion'. Pronoun 'ourself' incorrect; use plural reflexive 'ourselves'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms for habitual actions, structure sentences into clearer clauses, and use correct reflexive pronouns.