聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix repetition and verb forms (e.g., ‘stressed’).

範例: Yes, I do. I often chat with friends when I feel stressed or tired, because talking helps me relax. For example, last week I called a close friend and shared my worries, which made me feel much better.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Remove filler words and organize ideas with linking words like ‘for example’ or ‘and’. Use correct nouns and verbs (e.g., ‘new films’).

範例: We usually talk about everyday topics. For example, we discuss what we are wearing, new films we want to watch, and plans for the weekend.

建議: Answer directly and correct word choice. Use a simple reason and one supporting detail with linking words like ‘because’. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

範例: Personally, I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because conversations feel more relaxed. For instance, in one-on-one talks I can speak more honestly and we can go into more detail.

建議: State your preference clearly, give specific reasons and use linking words. Improve grammar (e.g., ‘I prefer chatting on social media’, ‘I feel more confident online’).

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I can use emojis and I feel more confident expressing difficult opinions online. For example, I once told a friend about a problem over chat when I couldn’t say it in person.

建議: Give a clear short answer, explain how arguments are handled, and finish your thought. Use linking words like ‘but’ and ‘however’. Provide a brief example or result.

範例: Yes, sometimes, but our arguments are usually friendly and not aggressive. Afterward, we often apologize and go for coffee to make up, so the friendship stays strong.

× Yes, especially when I am stressful, especially I when I am stressed and feel tired. I want to talk with someone to share my opinion and mood which can.

✓ Yes, especially when I am stressed and feel tired. I want to talk with someone to share my opinions and mood.

The student used 'stressful' incorrectly; 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, while 'stressed' describes a person’s state. There was also a duplicated phrase and an incomplete relative clause 'which can'. Suggestions: use 'stressed' for personal feeling, remove repeated words, and complete or remove unfinished clauses (e.g., 'to share my opinions and mood').

× Uh, we will talk about the maybe some tiny things such as, uh, what you wear today and what's what the, the what's new films are up they.

✓ Uh, we usually talk about small things, such as what we wore today and what new films are out.

The original mixes future 'will' with present habitual context and has word order errors and unnecessary fillers. Use present simple for habitual actions ('we usually talk'), 'small things' is more natural than 'tiny things', and 'what new films are out' is the correct phrase. Remove filler words and correct word order.

× MMM Personally, I prefer child with one people I like, uh, one we once talk. I don't want to talk with too many people because you need to, you need to, uh, care about too many people's.

✓ Personally, I prefer to chat with one person I like. I don't want to talk with too many people because you have to care about too many people's feelings.

Multiple issues: incorrect noun 'child' and 'one people' should be 'one person'; missing verb form 'prefer to chat'; repetitive fillers. Also 'you need to care about too many people's' is missing a noun ('feelings'). Suggestions: use 'one person', include the infinitive after 'prefer' ('prefer to chat'), and complete possessive phrases ('people's feelings').

× MMM actually I prefer chat while social media because I am I like use the emojis and I think, uh, some some word you can't say face to face to face, but I can. But I have courage when I online.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat on social media because I like using emojis, and I think some words you can't say face to face, but I can say them online. I feel more confident when I'm online.

Preposition 'on social media' is correct; original used 'while' incorrectly. 'Prefer' requires an infinitive or gerund ('prefer to chat' or 'prefer chatting'). 'I like using emojis' uses gerund correctly. 'Face to face' was repeated. 'When I online' lacks verb 'am'. Suggestions: use 'on social media', include correct verb forms ('using', 'say', 'am'), and replace 'courage' with 'confident' or 'more confident'.

× Yes, sometimes, but I think I will argue are uh, uh. Friendly, not very aggressive. So we often after the argument I will we will go for a.

✓ Yes, sometimes, but I think our arguments are friendly, not very aggressive. After the argument, we often go out together.

Errors include incorrect modal/future use ('I will argue are'), fragmented sentences, and wrong word order. Use present simple 'our arguments are friendly' to describe typical quality, and 'we often go out together' for habitual action. Remove extraneous words and complete the final clause ('go out together').