聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid awkward phrasing like “a positive way of how we live with each other.”

範例: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends because it makes me happy and helps me relieve stress. For example, after a busy day at school we often talk about funny things that happened, which lifts my mood.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then list specific topics using linking words. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases (e.g. “Just laid his things around us”). Keep sentences grammatical and coherent.

範例: We don't stick to one topic; our conversations vary. For instance, we often talk about sports, our classmates, teachers, and the homework we have to finish.

建議: Begin with a direct answer (I prefer chatting with one friend) and give clear reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g. ‘private’ or ‘one-on-one’ instead of ‘latter’ in casual speech) and fix unclear words like ‘district’.

範例: I prefer one-on-one conversations. Because in a private chat you can express your feelings more easily and the talk feels more personal and honest.

建議: Answer directly (face-to-face) then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear terms like “Frontier 1” and improve grammar (subject-verb agreement).

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it creates a closer atmosphere and you can read body language. Although social media is convenient, it lacks the immediate personal connection of meeting in person.

建議: Start with a clear yes/no and briefly describe a typical situation, using linking words to explain resolution. Improve grammar and clarity (e.g. “we had different views” and “we remained friends”).

範例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we have different opinions. However, we usually talk it through and respect each other’s views, so the disagreement doesn’t harm our friendship.

× Yes, of course I usually chat with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course I usually chat with my friends.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to describe a habitual action. Keep subject-verb agreement and adverb placement (usually before the main verb) as is.

× I think this is a positive way of how we live with each other and chat also brings us happiness and a way to relieve our stress.

✓ I think chatting is a positive way for us to connect with each other; it also brings us happiness and helps relieve our stress.

Original sentence has awkward structure and redundancy. Replace 'this is a positive way of how we live with each other' with 'chatting is a positive way for us to connect with each other' for clarity. Use 'helps relieve our stress' to show function. Use parallel structure and a semicolon or conjunction to join related ideas.

× Just laid his things around us and we usually don't chat on a fixed topic.

✓ We just talk casually and usually don't chat about a fixed topic.

Original phrase 'Just laid his things around us' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is casual conversation. Use 'talk casually' and correct preposition 'about' with 'chat about a fixed topic'.

× The topic we chat really vary from sports to the friends around us or the teachers and our homework so.

✓ The topics we chat about really vary from sports to the friends around us, or to teachers and our homework.

Subject 'topics' (plural) requires plural verb 'vary' which is correct, but word order and missing prepositions needed fixing: include 'about' after 'chat' and parallel prepositions 'to' for list items. Also change singular 'topic' to plural 'topics' to match 'vary' and the list.

× I would prefer the latter one because I am well I am in Group, I wouldn't want to chat with each other but in 1-2 one face to face chat it will be more district and you can show more emotions.

✓ I would prefer the latter one because I am not comfortable in groups; I wouldn't want to chat with many people at once. A one-to-one face-to-face chat is more direct and lets you show more emotion.

Original has multiple problems: 'I am well I am in Group' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'each other' and '1-2 one' misuse. 'District' should be 'direct' and 'emotions' better as 'emotion' or 'express more emotion'. Rephrase into clear sentences: negative preference 'not comfortable in groups', 'many people at once', and 'one-to-one' for one-on-one.

× Of course, the Frontier 1 because face to face communication always bring us more closer because of the atmosphere we create together that social media often offers us another way that we cannot chat in face to face.

✓ Of course, face-to-face communication, because it creates an atmosphere that brings us closer; social media is another option, but it does not offer the same closeness as face-to-face interaction.

Original is fragmented and contains word choice errors ('Frontier 1', 'bring us more closer'). Fix by restructuring into two clear clauses: state preference and contrast with social media. Use 'brings' (third-person singular) and 'closer' without 'more', and clarify 'does not offer the same closeness'.

× Yes, I once happy with my friends about one thing that we have different views, but actually I think everyone can own, own their own opinion.

✓ Yes, I once had a disagreement with my friends about something because we had different views, but I think everyone can have their own opinion.

Original mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'I once happy' needs past verb 'had' or 'was unhappy'; 'we have' should be past 'we had' to match 'once'; 'own, own their own opinion' is redundant. Use 'had a disagreement' and 'have their own opinion' for clarity.

× So that's not a big deal. And we finally, uh, be nice as before.

✓ So that's not a big deal, and in the end we were nice to each other as before.

Original 'we finally, uh, be nice as before' mixes modal/infinitive forms and incorrect tense. Use past tense 'were' to indicate the resolution of a past disagreement and add 'to each other' for clarity. Combine clauses for smoother flow.