聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like 'umm', correct grammar (e.g., 'the time that we sharing' → 'when we share'), and keep to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific reason or short example to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because sharing different perspectives is interesting and makes the time fly. For example, when we discuss films or weekend plans I often learn new ideas or recommendations.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and use clearer vocabulary. Replace vague phrases like 'some kind of' with specific topics (e.g., 'personal experiences' or 'plans'). Use one linking word to add detail and an example of a typical topic.

範例: We usually talk about personal experiences and how our week went. For instance, I often tell friends about work challenges or a funny event that happened during the week.

建議: Structure your answer with a clear conditional sentence and fewer hesitations. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast. Correct grammar and express reasons concisely (e.g., 'for deeper conversations I prefer one-on-one; for fun I prefer groups').

範例: It depends. For deeper, more personal conversations I prefer talking to one friend because it feels private and focused. However, when I want to have fun or feel energetic, I prefer chatting in a group.

建議: Answer directly then explain briefly with specific reasons. Avoid repetitions and finish your sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Correct phrasing ('know each other', 'if someone is busy, you can use social media').

範例: It depends, but I prefer face-to-face for emotional conversations because eye contact and body language help understanding. However, if someone is busy or far away, I use social media to stay in touch.

建議: Give a clearer, concise response: state frequency and typical cause, then explain outcome. Remove filler words and correct tense and phrasing ('we argue when deciding things', 'differences are usually resolved over time').

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue, mainly when making decisions or because of different opinions. Usually the disagreement is short-lived and we resolve it after talking things through.

× Because chatting with friends, the time that we sharing our own perspective are really interesting and arousing.

✓ Because when chatting with friends, the time that we share our own perspectives is really interesting and stimulating.

Error: 'we sharing' uses incorrect verb form; present participle needed after 'we are' or simple present 'we share'. Also 'perspective' should be plural to match 'our', and 'are' must agree with the singular subject 'time' so use 'is'. Suggestion: Use simple present 'we share' and ensure subject-verb agreement and plural noun where appropriate.

× You will feel that time flies through chatting with friends.

✓ You feel that time flies when you chat with friends.

Error: 'will feel' and 'through chatting' are awkward for a general truth; use simple present 'you feel' and 'when you chat' to describe habitual experiences. Also 'through chatting' is better phrased as 'when you chat'.

× I usually chat some kind of personal perspective or some kind of emotional, umm, information about the week.

✓ I usually chat about personal perspectives or emotional things that happened during the week.

Error: 'some kind of' is overused and unidiomatic; 'personal perspective' should be plural or pluralized idea. Replace with 'about' to indicate topic. Use 'things that happened' for events or information. Suggestion: Use concise expressions like 'personal perspectives' or 'emotional issues'.

× And we will just share what we happened on the week.

✓ And we just share what happened during the week.

Error: 'what we happened' is ungrammatical; use 'what happened' (active voice). Preposition 'on the week' is incorrect for time period; use 'during the week' or 'that week'. Suggestion: Use past simple 'happened' for events that occurred.

× I would say it depends umm if you want some kind of more personal or some kind of deeper conversations.

✓ I would say it depends: if you want a more personal or deeper conversation, I prefer talking with one friend.

Error: sentence is fragmented and uses 'some kind of' unnecessarily. Also 'conversations' plural mismatches 'a more personal'—make singular 'conversation' or restructure. Suggestion: Use a clear conditional structure 'if... I prefer...' and remove filler phrases.

× It will definitely choose only one friend.

✓ I would definitely choose only one friend.

Error: Subject is missing or wrong; 'It will definitely choose' uses incorrect subject 'it' and future tense awkward here. Use first person 'I would definitely choose' to match speaker. Suggestion: Use appropriate subject and modal for preference.

× But if you get more when I get more energetic or happiest funny I would say group of people.

✓ But if I am more energetic or feeling happier and funnier, I would say a group of people.

Errors: 'if you get more when I get more energetic' is confusing and mixes subjects. Use 'if I am more energetic' and 'feeling happier' to express mood. 'Happiest funny' wrong word forms; use 'happier and more fun' or 'funnier'. Add article 'a group of people'.

× Same, uh, it depends umm, if if you want to talk some kind of emotional conversations, I would say face to face is the best because you can talk deeper and through the eyes, through the umm eye contact you can know each others but someone is busy, you can.

✓ It depends: if you want to have emotional conversations, I would say face-to-face is best because you can talk more deeply and, through eye contact, get to know each other; but if someone is busy, you can use social media.

Errors: 'talk some kind of emotional conversations' is unidiomatic; use 'have emotional conversations'. 'Talk deeper' should be 'talk more deeply'. 'Know each others' is incorrect pronoun/plural form; use 'each other'. Sentence fragments and missing conclusion; complete with 'you can use social media'. Also 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used adjectivally.

× Yes, absolutely. Umm, we will mainly argue some kind of when we are making decisions and also we have some kind of different opinions of each others.

✓ Yes, absolutely. We mainly argue when we are making decisions, and we also have different opinions from each other.

Errors: 'we will mainly argue' is awkward for habitual action—use simple present 'we mainly argue'. Remove 'some kind of'. 'Different opinions of each others' is wrong preposition and pronoun; use 'opinions from each other' or 'different opinions with each other'.

× We will argued but time passed it will just gone the thing we don't.

✓ We argue, but over time the arguments pass and the issues go away.

Errors: 'will argued' mixes future auxiliary with past participle—incorrect. Use present simple 'we argue' for habitual action. 'Time passed it will just gone the thing we don't' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'over time the arguments pass and the issues go away.' Suggestion: Use clear present simple for habits and correct verb forms 'pass' and 'go away'.