聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Shorten and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "even when they are far away," "different kinds of apps"). Use varied vocabulary but keep sentences concise (max 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends online. It helps me stay connected when they live far away, and it’s a convenient way to spend time together. For example, we use WhatsApp or Instagram to share photos and plan meetups, which keeps our friendship strong.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Correct verb forms and use linking words: e.g., "For example," "also," "usually." Instead of vague phrases, give one or two concrete topics and a short example of how chats help you. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: We usually talk about studies and daily plans. For example, in our group chat we discuss homework and help each other solve difficult problems, and we also plan weekend activities together.

建議: Start with a clear preference and explain when you choose each option. Fix grammar ("It depends on the situation," "I prefer group chats for academic help," "one-to-one conversations for personal matters"). Use linking words like "because" and "however." Be specific about examples (e.g., assignments vs. personal advice).

範例: It depends on the situation. I prefer group chats for academic work because many people can share ideas and help solve problems. However, I choose one-to-one conversations for personal or sensitive topics, such as discussing plans with a friend or talking to my supervisor.

建議: Give a balanced, well-structured answer: start with a direct response (I prefer X for Y, but I also use Z). Correct grammar and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words like "because," "however," and give specific reasons and brief examples for both modes of communication.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication for important conversations because it builds stronger rapport and shows respect. However, I often use social media to keep in touch with friends and family who live far away, for example by video calls or messaging apps.

建議: Clarify the question and give one clear example. Correct grammar ("Yes, sometimes I argue with friends/supervisors when they don't understand my point"). Avoid repetition and be specific about why and how you argue and end with a brief result or resolution. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends when they misunderstand my opinions. For example, if someone misrepresents my idea in a group project, I calmly explain my point and give reasons so we can reach a solution.

× Definitely, I love chatting with my friends online because it helps me to stay connected with them even they are far away from me as well as it's a good way to spend quality time with them by chatting on the different kind of apps like Instagram as well as Facebook and mainly WhatsApp.

✓ Definitely, I love chatting with my friends online because it helps me stay connected with them even when they are far away, and it's a good way to spend quality time using different apps like Instagram, Facebook and mainly WhatsApp.

The sentence uses awkward and incorrect conjunctions and connectors ('as well as', 'even they are') and repeats conjunctions unnecessarily. Use 'when' after 'even' to introduce a clause about time and use 'and' to connect two main ideas. Also simplify repeated 'as well as' to 'and' and remove extra words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:16

× Honestly we chat about different kind of things with each other.

✓ Honestly, we chat about different kinds of things with each other.

'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also add a comma after introductory 'Honestly' for correct punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Like in Group chat we chatting about study related problems.

✓ For example, in group chats we talk about study-related problems.

The original sentence has wrong verb form 'we chatting' and incorrect word order. Change to simple present 'we talk' to match habitual action. Use hyphen in 'study-related' and pluralize 'group chats' for general reference. Grammar problem type ID:26

× If I have any problem in my studies I simply chatting with my friends and find the solution of it as well as we're chatting about the plannings.

✓ If I have any problem in my studies I simply chat with my friends and find a solution, and we also talk about plans.

After 'I' use base verb 'chat' not present participle 'chatting'. 'Find the solution of it' is unidiomatic; use 'find a solution'. 'Plannings' is incorrect count noun; use 'plans'. Also use 'we also talk' instead of 'we're chatting' for general habit. Grammar problem type ID:8

× It's depend on situation if I need help in my academics and assignments so I prefer to the group chats because in which I get more ideas as well as help with by more people.

✓ It depends on the situation; if I need help with my academics and assignments, I prefer group chats because I get more ideas and help from more people.

Use third person singular 'depends' with 'it'. Add article 'the' before 'situation'. Use 'help with' and 'from' to indicate source of help. Remove unnecessary 'to the' before 'group chats' and simplify phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:27

× So it it is easy to complete it and understand the topics but a lonely chat with my boss, somebody I prefer.

✓ So it is easier to complete tasks and understand the topics, but I prefer a one-on-one chat with a close friend or someone specific.

Pronoun and reference are unclear: 'it it' is repetition; 'complete it' unclear—use 'complete tasks'. 'Lonely chat with my boss, somebody I prefer' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'one-on-one chat' and clarify 'someone specific' or 'a close friend'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Will both have their own value like face to face interaction enhance the interest as well as increase our communication skills and it's showing love towards each other.

✓ Both have their own value: face-to-face interaction enhances interest, increases our communication skills, and shows affection towards each other.

'Will both have' is incorrect modal/context; use simple present 'both have'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated 'face-to-face' and verbs must agree 'enhances' (third person singular). 'It's showing' is awkward; use 'shows'. Grammar problem type ID:4

× It's a sense of respect as well as as compared to the other.

✓ It creates a sense of respect and is often considered better than other forms of communication.

Original phrase is ungrammatical and misuses articles and comparisons. 'A sense of respect' is okay but the rest 'as well as as compared to the other' is incorrect. Provide a clearer comparative clause 'better than other forms of communication'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Social media app helps to talk with the people who who live far away from us and I.

✓ Social media apps help us talk with people who live far away from us.

Duplicate 'who', incorrect word order and unnecessary 'and I'. Use plural 'apps' and correct verb agreement 'help' with plural subject. Place 'us' after 'help' and remove trailing 'and I'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, definitely some.

✓ Yes, definitely sometimes.

'Some' is not correct to indicate frequency; use adverb 'sometimes'. This fixes part of speech error. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Sometimes when my boss somebody are not understand my thing, I'm argue with her because I want to make my point relevant.

✓ Sometimes when someone does not understand my point, I argue with them because I want to make my point clear.

Original mixes 'boss somebody' and wrong verb agreement 'are not understand'. Use 'someone' or 'someone else' and correct verb 'does not understand'. Use 'I argue' not 'I'm argue'. Use gender-neutral 'them' unless gender is specified, and 'make my point clear' is idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I want and I want to I want that he understand my things easily.

✓ I want him to understand my ideas easily.

Remove repetition; use correct 'want + object + to-infinitive' structure: 'want him to understand'. Use 'ideas' instead of 'things' for clarity and 'understand' in base form after 'to'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Sometimes I argue with her in in some situation.

✓ Sometimes I argue with her in some situations.

Remove duplicated 'in', use plural 'situations' for generality, and keep simple present tense for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:26