聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect collocations (e.g. “my cup of tea” is fine but use consistent tense and articles).

範例: Yes, I enjoy texting my friends. I often update them about my daily schedule and share small moments from my day, which lifts my mood after a long workday.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and use precise, coherent supporting details. Use linking words (for example, “for example” or “because”) and correct tense and word forms. Avoid vague phrases like “after day we feel like it is really good.”

範例: We usually talk about everyday things, especially football fixtures and plans. For example, we discuss recent matches and arrange when to meet to watch games, which helps us relax after a busy day.

建議: Start with a direct answer and then explain with one or two clear reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (use articles, plural forms, and complete sentences) and remove filler sounds like “MMM.”

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because I am an extrovert. Each person brings a different perspective, so group conversations are more lively and interesting.

建議: Give a clear preference and explain reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like “my copy” or “which is bad.” Use linking words and concise examples about benefits of face-to-face communication.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and helps me read body language. For instance, meeting a friend in person creates a better atmosphere and allows for more meaningful conversations than texting.

建議: Answer the question directly and use clear, relevant vocabulary. Explain briefly why you avoid arguments and give a concrete example or consequence. Avoid confusing metaphors like “break the bone” and incorrect sentence structures.

範例: I try to avoid arguing with friends because conflicts can damage long-term relationships. If disagreements arise, I prefer to talk calmly and resolve them quickly so our friendship stays strong.

× Texting with friends is my cup of tea because I can share with them a lot of things such as schedule or daily life.

✓ Texting with friends is my cup of tea because I can share a lot of things with them, such as my schedule or details about my daily life.

The original sentence misorders 'a lot of things' and omits possessive 'my' before 'schedule' and 'daily life' to specify whose schedule and life are being discussed. Move 'a lot of things' before 'with them' for natural word order and add 'my' to clarify possession. Use 'details about my daily life' for clarity.

× Besides, I'm an extrovert so the activity like that can bring good mood for me instead of only working in a whole day.

✓ Besides, I'm an extrovert, so activities like that can put me in a good mood instead of spending the whole day working.

Use plural 'activities' to match general reference, add a comma before 'so', use 'put me in a good mood' (idiomatic) and replace 'in a whole day' with 'spending the whole day' for correct adverbial phrase and clearer meaning.

× I usually chat with my friends about daily life or football schedule, such as what we have just done.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about daily life or football schedules, for example what we have just done.

Use plural 'schedules' when speaking generally. 'Such as' can be replaced by 'for example' in this context. Present perfect 'have just done' is acceptable to refer to recent actions; adjust punctuation and wording for natural flow.

× After day we feel like it is really good because after a busy day we can talk to each other.

✓ At the end of the day we feel really good because after a busy day we can talk to each other.

'After day' is ungrammatical; use 'at the end of the day' to express the intended meaning. Remove redundant 'it' and streamline the sentence to avoid repetition of 'day' awkwardly.

× I'm extrovert so I prefer chatting with a group of people to chatting with only one friend.

✓ I'm an extrovert, so I prefer chatting with a group of people to chatting with just one friend.

Add the article 'an' before 'extrovert'. Insert a comma before 'so'. Use 'just one friend' for natural phrasing.

× I think that MMM each person have their own characteristics so talk to each other can bring other.

✓ I think that each person has their own characteristics, so talking to each other can bring something different.

Remove extraneous 'MMM'. Use singular verb 'has' to agree with singular subject 'each person'. Use 'their' as a gender-neutral singular pronoun (acceptable), change 'talk to each other' to gerund 'talking to each other' as the subject of 'can bring', and clarify 'bring something different' to complete the idea.

× I I think communicate face to face is my copy because I can talk in real life which is bad, which have better mood and experience for me.

✓ I think communicating face to face is my preference because I can talk in real life, which gives me a better mood and experience.

Remove duplicated 'I'. Use the gerund 'communicating' after 'think' to form a noun phrase. Replace 'my copy' with 'my preference'. Fix relative clause: 'which gives me a better mood and experience'—use singular verb 'gives' to agree with 'talk in real life' or the whole idea, and 'have' corrected to 'gives'.

× I can share with them a lot of things like schedule or filling up the whole day instead of working.

✓ I can share a lot of things with them, like my schedule or how I spend my whole day instead of working.

Reorder 'share a lot of things with them' for natural flow, add 'my' before 'schedule', and replace 'filling up the whole day' with 'how I spend my whole day' for clearer, grammatical phrasing.

× I'm trying to avoid going with my friends because it can break the bone.

✓ I try to avoid arguing with my friends because it can break the relationship between us.

The original 'going with my friends' is unclear; context suggests 'arguing'. 'Can break the bone' is idiomatic error—likely intended 'break the relationship' or 'cause a rift'. Use present simple 'I try' for habitual action. 'Can' is acceptable but clarify the object 'relationship'.

× We build in whole life so it is bad if we have not played with each other no more.

✓ We build relationships throughout our lives, so it is bad if we don't keep in touch with each other.

Rewrite the sentence for clarity: 'build in whole life' is ungrammatical; use 'build relationships throughout our lives'. Replace 'have not played with each other no more' with 'don't keep in touch with each other' to convey the intended meaning and correct negative construction.